Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请您修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语文错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11除起）不计分。

One day, there was a blind man sat on the steps of a building with a sign by his feet that read: "I am blind, please help." The kind and creative artist was walking by the blind man and stopped to observing that the man only had a few coins in his hat. He put a few of his own coins in the hat, and with stopping to ask for permission, took the sign, turned it around, and wrote a new message. He had then placed the sign by the feet of the blind man, and left. Late that afternoon the artist returned by the blind man and noticed that his hat was almost complete full of bills and coins. The blind man recognized his footstep and asked if it was her who had changed his sign. He also wanted to know why the man wrote on it. The blind man didn't know that his new sign read as this: "It's spring now, but I can't see it.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 sat—sitting 或who sat

 The—A

 observing---observe

 with---without

 had去掉

 Late---Later

 complete---completely

 footstep---footsteps

 her---he

 why---what

【解析】

试题分析：

 there was a blind man 是个完整的句子，后面应该是定语，sat—sitting 或who sat

 这里是泛指“一个好心的有创造力的艺术家”，The—A

 考查词组：stop to do停下来做…,observing---observe

 考查介词：未经允许，without permission，with---without

 考查时态：这是描写过去发生的动作，用一般过去式；had去掉

 考查形容词辨析：Late迟的，Later晚些时候

 修饰形容词full用副词：complete---completely

 考查名词：脚步声应该是复数：footstep---footsteps

 考查代词，这里指代的是艺术家而且是强调句，强调的是主语，her---he

 考查宾语从句，what在宾语从句中做宾语：why---what

考点：考查短文改错

点评：本题考查较为细致，要求考生要特别耐心答题中注意句子中人称和数是否一致，时态是否一致。各种词性之间的区别以及一些常用句型，固定短语的应用。一般的这类题型不会出现太复杂的单词和句子，这类题型考察基础知识较多。平时应注重积累，熟记一些句型及惯用结构。修改前先细读短文，标出出错的位置，改完以后还得细读短文，看看改过后的短文是否语意通顺，符合逻辑。