Question

【题目】 短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个楼字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

In China, there is a old saying that one’s hair and skin are given by his parents, so there is no right for him to change his skin. But as the development of high technology, more and more people chose to take the plastic surgery to make them look more perfectly. Many years ago, plastic surgery was very popular in Korea. Chinese people start to accept the plastic surgery because the influence of the Korean TV series. Though people can make themselves look more beautiful, but I don’t support the plastic surgery. People will hurt himself, for they don’t know the risk that they may face. What’s more, after the surgery, there are always side effects, that hurt people all the time. For the normal people, it is no need to change their face. The real beauty is from the soul, while the beauty gaining by surgery can’t change people’s soul.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】a --an

【2】as ---with

【3】chose --- choose

【4】perfectly --- perfect

【5】because后加of

【6】去掉but

【7】himself ---themselves

【8】that ---which

【9】it ---there

【10】gaining --- gained

【解析】

【1】a –an考查冠词。old是元音字母开头的单词，所以冠词用an，，在中国有一个古老的说法，故a –an

【2】as ---with考查介词。但是随着高科技的发展。故as ---with

【3】 chose --- choose考查动词时态。本文用的是一般现在时，所以动词用一般现在式。故chose --- choose

【4】 perfectly --- perfect考查形容词。系表结构的表语一般用形容词而不能用副词做表语。look为系动词后面要用形容词perfect做表语。越来越多的人选择接受整形手术使他们看起来更完美。故perfectly --- perfect

【5】because后加of考查连词。 the influence of the Korean TV series是一个短语，不是一个完整的句子，故because后加of

【6】去掉but考查连词。前半句有Though，后半句不用but，故去掉but

【7】himself ---themselves考查代词。此处指代People是第三人称复数，故代词用themselves，故himself ---themselves

【8】that ---which考查关系词。非限制定语从句引导词用which。故that ---which

【9】it ---there考查介词。对于一般人来说，是不需要改变脸的。故it ---there

【10】gaining --- gained考查动词。此处表被动，通过手术得来的美无法改变人们的心灵。故gaining --- gained