请根据以下提示.并结合事例.用英语写一篇短文. We can go as far as we think. The great minds, more often than not, think more and have more aggressive ideas of their life than ordinary people. 注意: ①无须写标题, ②除诗歌外.文体不限, � 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

题目内容

请根据以下提示，并结合事例，用英语写一篇短文。

We can go as far as we think. The great minds, more often than not, think more and have more aggressive ideas of their life than ordinary people.

注意：

①无须写标题；

②除诗歌外，文体不限；

③文中不得透漏个人姓名和学校名称;

④词数为120左右，如引用提示语则不计入总词数。

【答案】

One possible version:

What we think is our direction and a goal of advancement. It guides us and makes us know what we really want and where we go. Then we spare our efforts to take active steps to make our dreams come true.

For example, Thomas Edison had a dream. He dreamed of a lamp that could be operated by electricity, and began where he stood to put his dream into action. Despite more than ten thousand failures, he stood by that dream until he made it a physical reality! And today, his dream lights up the world at night.

We think. We choose. And as we think and choose, so are our lives formed. In the end, forming our own destiny is what ambition is about.

【解析】

试题分析：考查半开放性作文。本文讨论的话题是梦想和目标的巨大作用。此类文章考生首先要表明自己的立场，要举例进行详细的说明，要求考生在保证内容要点全部概括的基础上可以充分发挥自己的想象，进而用自己的语言来表达某种观点或看法，增添了写作的灵活性，同时能较好地考查考生的想象能力和英语语言表达能力。

考点：考查半开放性作文

点评：半开放性作文给出了一个话题，并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，如besides, further, last but not least等。在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。