Question

【题目】书面表达

假如你是李华，最近你所居住的城市（北京）的雾霾严重影响了人们的生活。请根据写作要点给报社写一篇稿件反映这一问题。

写作要点：1. 雾霾带来的危害。

2. 你的建议。

注意：词数100左右。 参考词汇:雾霾 smog

Answer 1

【答案】

As we all know, smog has always been a serious problem in Beijing, which has done great harm to our daily life. Recently it has become more and more serious. The heavy smog has caused many traffic accidents, which has brought great sadness to the families. In the street, you can see many people wear masks. But unluckily, many old people wear and babies can’t escape suffering from illness caused by smog.

Therefore, it is very urgent for us to take measures to reduce the smog. It is very vital to educate people, especially factory owners to raise awareness of protecting the environment. Moreover, people should go to work by bus or bike instead of driving every day. And media should call on citizens to work together to do something to save the air that we can’t live without.

【解析】

试题分析：考查开放性作文。要求以李华的身份给你报社写文章反映北京的雾霾严重影响人们的生活的问题。所以文章要使用一般现在时，同时第一称和第三人称交替使用。本文对学生的要求很高，文章的要点都没有给出，只给了一个提纲，要求考生根据实际情况自行组织要点。建议要点如下：1.提出问题：最近越来越严重的雾霾已经成为北京市一个严重的问题。2.雾霾的危害：影响日常生活；导致交通事故，给家人带来悲伤；很多人因为雾霾患上了呼吸道疾病；3.个人建议：立刻采取措施减少雾霾；最重要的教育人们导致雾霾的主要原因，人们应该绿色出行，所有的媒体应该呼吁大家一起努力减少空气污染。建议文章分成两段，第一段提出问题并叙述雾霾的危害。第二段提出个人治理雾霾的建议。写作时注意谋篇布局，所给要点要接地气，建议要实用有效。