Question

【题目】留意一下我们的周边，可以发现陪读现象已蔚然成风。请你根据以下要点写一篇短文，内容应包括：

1．简要描述陪读现象；

2．分析父母陪读的原因（2至3个）；

3．发表你对此的看法。

________________________________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

【答案】

Should Our Parents Accompany Us in Studying at School?

In recent years, many parents choose to accompany their children in studying, which has aroused a wide concern.

These parents are willing to leave their hometown, even quit their jobs to follow their children into the campus. Most of them rent an apartment nearby so as to take good care of their children. Parents consider it necessary to offer a better living condition to the kids. Meanwhile, it can allow them to keep track of the kids’ academic performance.

Nevertheless, what they’ve ignored is that it will get their kids into the habit of being dependent. Thus, they will never develop the ability of self-control in the future.

Trust leads to independence. So it seems to me that parents should create room for children’s growth and study in order to ensure their overall development.

【解析】

本文属于半开放性作文，同时也是一篇正反观点类的议论文。要求简单描述陪读现象，分析原因，可以从孩子的自理能力不足，学校的作息时间引起学生学习时间受限等角度着手。在描述原因时可以使用合适的连接词来连接，让他们成为一个整体。在发表个人观点的时候，要注意使用谚语或者高级句型让文章更有档次

【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语be willing to do 愿意做某事；so as to 为了；allow sb to do 允许某人做某事；keep track of 记录；lead to 导致；Parents consider it necessary to offer a better living condition to the kids.这个句子运用it做形式宾语，真正的宾语是后面的不定式；Nevertheless, what they’ve ignored is that it will get their kids into the habit of being dependent这个句子what引导主语从句，that引导表语从句；So it seems to me that parents should create room for children’s growth and study in order to ensure their overall development这个句子运用到it seem that ..好象，这个固定句型；