题目内容
假定你是高中生李华,对西方文化非常感兴趣,想在暑期去英国旅游。请你给你的英国网友戴维(David)发一封电子邮件。内容包括:1. 旅游目的;2. 旅游计划;3. 需要的帮助。注意:1.词数100左右 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear David,
I have been expecting to travel to the UK so that I can experience English culture personally. I am writing to ask for some advice.
My parents and I plan to travel to the UK during the summer holidays. We are to spend a week in London. Since this is the first time that I have traveled abroad, I would like to know which places of interest are well worth visiting. Can you offer me some advice and recommend some tourist attractions to me?
I would appreciate it if you could write back to me soon.。
【解析】
试题分析:假定你是高中生李华,对西方文化非常感兴趣,想在暑期去英国旅游。请你给你的英国网友戴维(David)发一封电子邮件。内容包括:1. 旅游目的;2. 旅游计划;3. 需要的帮助。要求我们把内容翻译成完整通顺的句子,适当添加些内容,使文章更充实。写作时注意准确运用时态、语态,使上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇、短语和高级句型为文章润色,避免全写成简单句。注意要求的字数在100词左右,不要太多也不要太少。
【亮点说明】I have been expecting to travel to the UK so that I can experience English culture personally.本句中含有一个so that引导的结果状语从句且主句用的是现在完成进行时态;Since this is the first time that I have traveled abroad, I would like to know which places of interest are well worth visiting.此句是一个含有Since引导的原因状语从句的复合句,从句中包含了“It/This/That is the first (second…) time that 主语+现在完成时态---。”这样的高级句式,而在主句中运用了which引导的宾语从句和高级词组be well worth doing;I would appreciate it if you could write back to me soon.。句中使用了it的用法并含有一个条件状语从句,这样显得文章很上档次。
考点:考查电子邮件形式的话题作文。