Question

16．假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文．文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧，并在此符号下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线\划掉．
修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Time flies!This is a third year that I have been in this school．In the past two and a half years，our school had organized many activities．What impressed me best was an activity called"Learning to Farm"．In an autumn afternoon，we were sent to a farm which we learned to plant potatoes．Having been in the city for so a long time，we were so happy to go to the countryside．After divided into 3groups，we started to work．Some students cut potatoes into pieces； some dug holes，and the others put the pieces into the hole，put the earth back and pushed them down hard．We continued doing that until all the work was done．Although we were exhausted，but we felt happy on our way back home．

Answer 1

分析 短文主要描述了作者回忆在这个学校记忆深刻的一次活动．

解答 Time flies!This is a third year that I have been in this school．In the past two and a half years，our school had organized many activities．What impressed me best was an activit
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1．a改为the，考查冠词，第三年，前面用定冠词the．
2．had改为has，考查时态，表示自过去某一时刻到说话时这段时间中的经历，用现在完成时，所以had 改为has．
3．best改为most，考查最高级，这里表示给我印象最深的活动是，所以best 改为most．
4．In改为on，考查介词，在一个秋天的下午，应该用on an autumn afternoon．
5．which改为where，考查定语从句，这是一个修饰先行词a farm的定语从句，且关系词在从句中作地点状语，所以which改为where．
6．so改为such，考查副词，such后跟名词，所以so 改为such．
7．After后加being，考查语态，"我们"和"分成三组"是被动关系，故用现在分词的被动式．
8．hole改为holes，考查名词，根据the pieces of potatoes，所以hole用复数．
9．them改为it，考查代词，这里是单数，所以them改为it．
10．去掉but，考查连词，Although与but不能连用，所以去掉but．

点评 短文改错要具备两个基础，一是懂得分析句子结构，二是知道充当各个句子成分的词类或词性．并且注意人称代词，从句的引导词，名词单复数，和全文时态的理解，对于一些固定搭配，平时的学习中要多注意积累．