题目内容

短文写作（共1题；满分30分）

请你根据以下提示，结合你生活中的一个事例，用英语写一篇短文。

Honesty means always telling the truth and never cheating. Honesty is a kind of courage and responsibility, an invisible power and wealth. Honesty wins trust, respect and friendship. So it pays to be honest.

注意: 1、无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语

2、内容必须结合你生活中的一个事例

3、文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称

4、词数不少于120字，如引用提示语则不计入总数

 

 

 

 

 

One possible version

Honesty means always telling the truth.Also, honesty is a kind of courage and responsibility,which can not only win trust but also happiness.

When I was 5, I fell in love with chocolate. One day, I was eager to have some chocolate but without money. And I stole some money from my mom’s wallet and bought a lot. But when I was about to enjoy it, I saw Mom looking for money worriedly. Seeing Mom, I felt sorry for what I had done. The chocolate was not delicious anymore. I gathered courage to tell her what I had done and waited for another storm. To my surprise , Mom smiled instead of being angry with me. She said ,”You are a great girl because of your honesty, though you have made a mistake.”

So essential was honesty that it helped me gain happiness again.What’s more, it also deepens the love between Mom and me. (160words)

【解析】

试题分析：题目要求根据英文提示并结合事例写一篇短文。提示语的意思是“诚实意味着永远讲真话，从不欺骗。诚实是一种勇气、 责任、 无形的力量和财富。为人诚信可以赢得信任、 尊重和友谊。所以诚信是很值得的”。文章无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；内容必须结合生活中的一个事例，文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。词数不少于120字，如引用提示语则不计入总数。

亮点说明：

本文抓住了提示语的重点，用通俗易懂的事例向我们阐述了做一个勇于承认、勇于担当的诚实的人的好处：不仅能洗刷自己心中的愧疚，还能赢得她人的肯定与理解。文中运用了许多固定短语，如fell in love with, be eager to, be about to, not any more,to my surprise， instead of...这些都显示了作者良好的日常积累。其次，文章中时间状语从句的使用如But when I was about to enjoy it, I saw Mom..., 现在分词做伴随状语的使用如Seeing Mom, I felt sorry for what I had done，倒装句的使用如So essential was honesty that it helped me gain happiness again，都为文章增色不少。

问题说明：

首先，文章第一段基本完全引用了题目英文提示语，尽管确有文采，但却违反了题目明确标注的注意事项，也给阅卷者一种“作者词穷”的感觉。其次，文章第一段单纯议论，第二段直接举例，显得十分突兀，可在第一段断尾或第二段段首加一句过渡语，如For me, i can’t agree with it more等。另外，文章有几处都略显Chinglish，如I was eager to have some chocolate but without money等，可改为I was eager to have some chocolate but i suffered a lack of money。最后，文章结尾处犯了明显的时态错误，deepens应改为deepened。

考点：事例类作文

 

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