Question

短文写作

请根据以下提示，结合你校园中的一个事例，就“失败”这一话题，用英语写一篇短文。

Everyone has experienced failure．In face of failure, people act differently．Some simply give up, while some still stick to what they are doing．How we respond to it decides whether we'll succeed．

注意：①无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；

②除诗歌外，文体不限；

③内容必须结合校园生活中的一个事例；

④文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；

⑤词数120左右。

Answer 1

答案：
解析：

　　评分原则：

　　1、主要结构正确、用给定的英语词完整表达所给的汉语信息，给满分；

　　2、未用给定词不给分；

　　3、主要结构不正确不给分；

　　4、主要结构正确，信息完整，但一个或一个以上拼写错误扣0.5分；

　　5、主要结构正确，信息有遗漏扣0.5分；

　　6、主要结构正确，添加无关信息扣0.5分；

　　7、其它可以接受的可能答案。

　　书面表达：One possible version：

　　It's universally accepted that we all may have to face failure many times．For example, as senior students, we may suffer failures in exams．Discouraging as failure are, we must keep a good state of mind and go on with our work, not let failure stand in the way of our success．

　　I can still remember clearly that I suffered many a failure and felt annoyed．But I managed to calm myself down and reflected our learning methods, making some changes when necessary．Meanwhile, I turned to my teachers and followed students for advice．By sticking to my study persistently I have made steady progress．I truly hope I can be a success later in life．

　　Anyhow, it is impossible to live without failing at something, and it is our attitude to it that determines whether we can really make a difference．(142w)