题目内容
请写一篇吸烟危害的短文.
内容要点:
吸烟会导致许多疾病,甚至一些危及生命的疾病.
吸烟不但对吸烟者自己有害,也严重影响不吸烟者的健康.
据报道,美国每年至少有32万人因吸烟而丧生.目前约有四千万人仍在吸烟.
可喜的是,越来越多的人已认识到其危害,开始戒烟.
青年学生不应该养成这一恶习,如有这一习惯,应尽早戒除.
I think smoking is harmful to our health.I hope that smokers will give up smoking from now on. Smoking cigarettes can lead to heart disease, cancer and other health problems.As we know ,it dose great harm not only to smokers themselves, but also to those who don‘t smoke.
It is reported that at least three hundred and twenty thousand Americans are killed by smoking each year.And about 40 million smokers continue to smoke cigarettes today.Fortunately, more and more people have come to realize the danger of smoking and begin to stop it.
As a result, you shouldn’t form such a habit.I hope you will make up your mind to stop smoking, for it is easy to do away with cigarettes in the beginning
【解析】
试题分析:考查提纲式作文。写好提纲式作文的关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲,因此考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示,认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系,然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态。根据所给提纲,列出要点,并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力,灵活运用英语知识,采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来,注意主次分明,详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词,使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误用等。这篇习作所需内容已经全部以中文形式提供给考生,因此需要在已提供内容的基础上,对内容进行整合,达到最好的表达效果。
【亮点说明】文章第一段第一句话概括地讲述了吸烟所带来的不好的身体影响,然后再具体说出已提供内容,用的很好。在最后一段,又巧妙地使用了it is easy to do away with cigarettes in the beginning说明才发生就戒除要容易得多,鼓励青少年下定决心戒烟。
考点:考查提纲式作文