题目内容
一家英语报社向中学生征文,主题是“十年后的我”、请根据下列要求和你的想象完成短文、家庭、工作、业余生活.
注意:1、次数100左右;2、可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3. 开头语已为你写好
I often imagine what my life will be like in the future.
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One Possible Version
I often imagine what my life will be like in the future. I think my life will be very different in ten years. I will be twenty-eight years old by then. I will have my own family. Probably with a lovely child. I hope I will work in a computer company as a program designer. I will enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues, I will do a good job in whatever I do. In my free time, I will continue to take regular exercise, such as swimming, running and various ball games. On my holidays, I will travel around the world. In a word, my life will be much richer and more colorful.
【解析】
试题分析:这是一篇典型的提纲式半开放书面表达。主题是“十年后的我”,这意味着文章的时态应该以一般将来时为主,用第一人称。题干还明确三大要点:家庭;工作;生活,因此文章条理非常清楚,可按照顺序逐一展开话题。考生写作时要注意一下几点:
时态。以一般将来时为主。
要点明确。围绕三大要点展开。
使用连接词。连接词的使用使文章更加连贯。
【亮点说明】
本文最大的亮点是用了许多高级词汇和短语。如imagine,Probably,get along well with,take regular exercise,In a word等。文章还使用了很多亮点句式,如I often imagine what my life will be like in the future.使用了宾语从句。I will do a good job in whatever I do也使用了宾语从句。
考点:考查提纲作文