题目内容
3．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（划掉．
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Dear Jack，
To appreciate Tang poems good can further improve your language skills and your understanding of Chinese culture．Let's share you my opinions on how to appreciate Tang poems．
To start with，you'd better know about some background knowledge about Tang poetry．Tang Poetry refers to poetry writing during China's Tang Dynasty．During that time，poetry became an important part of social life at all level of society．Du Fu，Li Bai and Bai Juyi are the best known poets at that time．Tang Dynasty poetry was simple but about common things like love，romance and nature what people appreciate．Besides，read as many as possible about poems and we can have a better understanding of Tang poems．As a Chinese saying goes，"when one learns 300poems of the Tang Dynasty by the heart，one is sure to be able to write poems．"
分析 本文主要介绍欣赏唐诗的一些方法．比如，了解唐诗的背景知识；了解唐朝诗人，像李白，杜甫和白居易等；熟读唐诗等．
解答 Dear Jack，
To appreciate Tang poems good can further improve your language skills and your understanding of Chinese culture．Let's share∧you my opinions on how to appreciate Tang poems．
To start with，you'd better know about some background knowledge about Tang poetry．Tang Poetry refers to poetry writing during China's Tang Dynasty．During that time，poetry became an important part of social life at all level of society．Du Fu，Li Bai and Bai Juyi are the best known poets at that time．Tang Dynasty poetry was simple but about common things like love，romance and nature what people appreciate．Besides，read as many as possible about poems and we can have a better understanding of Tang poems．As a Chinese saying goes，"when one learns 300poems of the Tang Dynasty by the heart，one is sure to be able to write poems．"
详解：
1．good改为well 考查副词．appreciate是动词，要用副词修饰．
2．culture改为cultures 考查名词复数．culture常用作不可数名词，当表示某一特定形式的文化或某种类型的文化时，可用于复数形式．
3．加with 考查介词．share with意为"把（自己的感受）告诉（某人）"，是固定搭配．
4．writing改为written 考查过去分词． poetry与write之间是动宾关系，用过去分词短语written during China's Tang Dynasty作后置定语．
5．level改为levels 考查固定搭配．at all levels of意为"各级"，是固定搭配．
6．are改为were 考查动词时态．根据句中at that time，要用一般过去时态．
7．but改为and 考查连词．前后两个分句之间是并列关系而非转折有关系，用连词and．
8．what改为that/which/去掉what 考查定语从句．分析句子结构可知这是一个定语从句，先行词things在从句中作动词appreciate的宾语，用关系代词that/which，也可以省略宾语，即去掉what．
9．many改为much 考查副词．read是动词，要用副词修饰，many不可作副词使用．
10．we改为you 考查代词．根据句意：你能更好地理解唐诗．用代词you．
点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文，短文故事，书信等，具有很强的实用性．短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际，从表面上看类似一篇学生习作．首先，通读全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑，在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好，再进行逐句改错．其次，要进行逐个句子的改错．这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意．最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍，检查答案是否正确，感觉是否还有不妥之处，最终形成定稿．
