Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\） 划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Once upon a time there was a rich man. He had a lot of money, but he felt unhappy all the times. Finally, the rich man left for home to look for  happiness. He visited many places and met many rich men. All of them said they were not happy, too. On his way home, the rich man saw a farmer work in the field. He went up to the farmer and asked, “Could you tell me if you felt happy?” “Yes, I’m quite happier. I always feel satisfying about everything in my life,” the farmer answered. “Please tell me how you find happiness,” asked the rich man. The farmer answered with smile on his face. “It’s very easy of me to answer the question. If you work hardly, have three meals a day and go to bed early without worries, you’ll be the happiest man in the world.”

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Once upon a time there was a rich man. He had a lot of money, but he felt unhappy all the times. Finally, the  rich man left for home to look  for happiness. He

time （这里指时间，是不可数名词）  （离开家用leave即可）

visited many places and met many rich men. All of them said they were not happy, too. On his way home, the rich man saw a farmer work in the field . He went up to

either （否定句里的也用either表示） working（farmer与work构成主动关系）

the farmer and asked, “ Could you tell me if you felt happy?” “Yes I’m quite

feel（直接引语用现在时）

happier. I always feel satisfying about everything in my life,” the farmer

happy（quite后接原级）   satisfied（修饰人用satisfied）

answered. “Please tell me how you find happiness,” asked the rich man. The farmer answered with ∧ smile on his face. “ It’s very easy of me to answer the

a (泛指微笑)           for（easy不是表示人性格的名词，后面用of）

question. If you work hardly, have three meals a day and go to bed early without

hard(hardly几乎不，在这里意思错误)

worries, you’ll be the happiest man in the world.”

【解析】如上