题目内容
【题目】假定你是中学生李华,计划端午节邀请外教Thomas去你家做客。请给Thomas写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.出发时间,地点及交通方式;
2.活动:包粽子,讲述节日来源等。
注意:1.词数:100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇: 粽子:Zongzi
Dear Thomas,
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Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Thomas,
It will be the Dragon Boat Festival next Friday. I would like to invite you to celebrate the day with my family.
On the Dragon Boat Festival, families conventionally have a big dinner, eating Zongzi and other delicious foods to honor an ancient poet named Qu Yuan. I will tell you the stories behind the festival while we are making Zongzi. I’m sure you’ll take an interest. How desperate I am to share the Chinese happiness and delicate fine dining with you. If you can come, my father will pick us up at 5:00 pm next Friday at the school gate.
All my families really long for your acceptance and coming.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】试题分析:这是一篇提纲类作文,话题是端午节邀请外教Thomas去你家做客的一封邮件,我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达。但是你的观点要自己组织,写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。
【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少,比如take an interest,pick up,look forward to;还运用句型:On the Dragon Boat Festival, families conventionally have a big dinner, eating Zongzi and other delicious foods to honor an ancient poet named Qu Yuan.这句运用了现在分词作状语;How desperate I am to share the Chinese happiness and delicate fine dining with you.这句话运用了感叹句等。并注意了句子的衔接如while,and,if等等。