Question

假设你是临沭一中的学生王伟，班里从外地转来一名同学张宁，他一时无法融入新的班集体中，感到很苦恼。请根据下列要点用英语给他写一封信：

*帮他分析原因

*给他提出建议

*陈述你帮助他的具体打算

注意：词数120-150

Dear Zhang Ning，

Best regards,    Wang Wei

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Zhang Ning，

I know you are now having trouble communicating with others, and you may often feel lonely. That’s because you are new here and people don’t know about you. But I think you can make it if only you can follow the advice below.

First, you should take an active part in the discussions and show your own opinion about the matters and at the same time, learn to listen to other people’s views. Second, you should learn about your classmates’ likes and dislikes. Then you can have much in common with them. This way, you can get to know more different people and show them that you are just as friendly. Last but not least, I’m always here ready to help. We can take part in some activities together and I can introduce you to others.

With time going on, people will know you better and will like to make friends with you if you can do as the above.

Yours,

Wang Wei

【解析】

试题分析：本文是给王伟的建议，他无法融入新班级，可能是由于自身的性格不够开朗，或者对于当地的文化不够了解，或者是与他人交往的技巧不够等原因造成的。提出的建议方面可以从主动和同学进行交流，多参与各种活动，让其他的同学了解你等。采用了这些技巧，情况应该能够有所改善。要求考生在保证内容要点全部概括的基础上可以充分发挥自己的想象，进而用自己的语言来表达某种观点或看法，增添了写作的灵活性，同时能较好地考查考生的想象能力和英语语言表达能力。

考点：考察半开放性短文写作

点评：半开放性作文给出了一个话题，并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，如besides, further, last but not least等。在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。