题目内容
【题目】李教授有着一套独特的植树方法：他种树不是过分细心照看，而是让其在艰苦的环境中自由地生长。结合“个人成长需要艰难生活的磨砺”这一话题谈谈你的看法，写一篇120词左右的英语短文（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）：
1. 你是否认同李教授的做法，为什么？
2. 叙述当前独生子女广泛得到父母溺爱的现象，并由此产生一些不良后果；
3. 假如你是父母一方，你会用何种方式来教育和磨砺自己的孩子？
As we all know, Professor Li has a special way of planting trees.
【答案】
As we all know, professor Li has a special way of planting trees. He doesn’t take too much care of his trees, just letting them survive and grow in the bad environment freely.
I thorough agree with what professor does. The trees could have strong perseverance to survive by themselves. As long as they have their survival ability, they will grow healthy.
Today under the system of the birth control in our country, every family has only one child. So parents do everything they could to meet their children’s needs. However, all parents do is not help their children but to destroy them.
If I were a parent, I would make my child do more hard work and experience a variety of sufferings and hardships as much as possible. I would also teach my child to undertake the responsibilities of the family and society.
【解析】
试题分析：考查提纲式作文。写好提纲式作文的关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲，因此考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系，然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态。根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。本篇文章需要把握主题：个人成长需要艰难生活的磨砺。围绕主题，展开要点。
【亮点说明】
文章第一段在所给开头之后的He doesn’t take too much care of his trees, just letting them survive and grow in the bad environment freely. 对李教授的植树方法给予明确说明解释，有助于联系到独生子女的教育问题。在第三段对父母溺爱的现象的分析时，并没有说明各个溺爱现象，而是选取与主题相关的磨砺问题，直扣主题，非常值得考生学习。最后一段假设部分，选用虚拟语气，准确到位。
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