Question

【题目】请根据下面三幅图完成一篇120词左右的短文。

要求：

1.简要描述下图内容，并说明主题；

2．联系实际，表达该图带给你的启示。

参考词汇：退后step back

Answer 1

【答案】

Impressed by the breathtaking view surrounding a rock, Li Ming would like a picture taken by his friend with the surrounds as the background. When his friend said “Hold！” in English, meaning not moving, being a Chinese, Li Ming naturally mistook it for “step back” and did as required. Ridiculously, the misunderstanding caused several repetitive “holds” from the friend, which thus resulted in the falling of Li Ming from the edge of the rock!

Funny as the pictures are, there is a serious message in them—misunderstanding can bring disasters to our life.

I think if either of them had ever stopped and communicated more with the other, such a tragedy could have been avoided. So next time when I feel there might be misunderstanding in my life, I will try to communicate with others and thus clear the air.

【解析】这是一篇看图作文，由图我们可以看出是一个人拿着相机给另一个人拍照，他用英文说“hold”，拍照的那个人误以为是让他退后，最终他就从山上掉下去了。由此我们可以得出一个结论：误解也许会给我们的生活带来致命的伤害。从而我们可以联系我们的生活实际，用自己的亲身经历来论证该观点。本篇佳作分析：这篇文章结构清晰，条理清楚，层次分明。首先描述了改图片的内容，得出启示，然后联系到自己今后生活中应注意的事，最后提出解决办法。文章使用了过去分词引导状语从句，倒装句等句型，使文章更加生动，并用了大量的词组如bring…to…，communicate with sb等使文章表达更加贴切。在点明观点的时候，使用了I think，使文章内容看起来更加简洁。改进建议：如果能多用些高级词汇以及高级表达，那么该篇文章将更加精彩。

考点:考查看图作文。