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7．《21世纪英文报》中学生版举行以"An Unforgettable Experience in My High School Life"为题的征文活动，请你用英语写篇100-120个字的文章，记述一件令你难忘的事．要求如下：
1．记述事情经过．
2．简要说明你感到难忘的原因或从中得到的启示．
注意：文章的标题已给出（不计词数）
An Unforgettable Experience in My High School LifeHow times goes by!It won't be long before I say goodbye to my high school life．Looking back on what has happened during the past three years，there is one thing that is most unforgettable to me．（高分句型一）It was my turn to give an English speech in class．I felt worried because I was ashamed of my broken English．So I went to Mr．Li，my English teacher，for help．He not only encouraged me，but also offered some valuable advice．I spent nearly two hours practicing it at home until I was satisfied．To my joy，my performance turned out to be such a great success that my teacher and all my classmates applauded when I finished it．（高分句型二）It is the teacher's encouragement that helps me gain courage and build up my confidence．（高分句型三）Through the experience，I know that whenever we have difficulties we should never be afraid to ask others for help．Sometimes the advice from others matters a lot．．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息《21世纪英文报》中学生版举行以"An Unforgettable Experience in My High School Life"为题的征文活动，请你用英语写篇100-120个字的文章，记述一件令你难忘的事，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，要点包括：记述事情经过．简要说明你感到难忘的原因或从中得到的启示．2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：say goodbye to 说再见；Look back on 回顾；be ashamed of 对…感到羞愧；To my joy令我高兴的是；build up建立；
Looking back on what has happened during the past three years，there is one thing that is most unforgettable to me．（高分句型一）
To my joy，my performance turned out to be such a great success that my teacher and all my classmates applauded when I finished it．（高分句型二）
It is the teacher's encouragement that helps me gain courage and build up my confidence．（高分句型三）

解答 My Most Unforgettable Experience in High School
      How times goes by!It won't be long before I say goodbye to my high school life．Looking back on what has happened during the past three years，there is one thing that is most unforgettable to me．（高分句型一）It was my turn to give an English speech in class．I felt worried because I was ashamed of my broken English．So I went to Mr．Li，my English teacher，for help．He not only encouraged me，but also offered some valuable advice．I spent nearly two hours practicing it at home until I was satisfied．To my joy，my performance turned out to be such a great success that my teacher and all my classmates applauded when I finished it．（高分句型二）It is the teacher's encouragement that helps me gain courage and build up my confidence．（高分句型三）Through the experience，I know that whenever we have difficulties we should never be afraid to ask others for help．Sometimes the advice from others matters a lot．

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．