Question

第II卷  第三部分：写作（共两节，满分35分）

第一节：短文改错：（共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分）.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。 

The long-desired winter vacation arrived in the end.As soon as the    86_______

bell rang,announced the end of the class,each student couldn't wait           87_______

to rush out of the classroom. Half an hour late, my good friend Li Ming   88_______

and I were on the way back home. Such crowded was the train 89_______

we took that we had to stand.Thinking the coming Spring Festival     90_______

and the two weeks' stay with parent, we both felt happy and gay.All  91_______

of a sudden,I saw a man picking a purse of an old lady’s pocket.       92_______

With the help of Li Ming,I caught the pickpocket and force him to give    93_______

back the purse to a lady.The thief was taken away by the guard. 94_______

Praised by other passengers,so we felt proud of what we had done.    95_______

Answer 1

86. right  87 announced----announcing  88. late----later  89.Such---So

90. Thinking---Thinking of/about   91. parent---parents   92.第二个of 前加out

93. force---forced   94. a---the  95. drop “so”