Question

10．目前，我们身边到国外留学的学生越来越多，近五年来一直以两位数的比例增长，据统计，2016 年度我国出国留学人员总数为 54.45 万人．请根据这一现象，写一 篇英语作文，题目为：Studying Abroad：Good Or Bad，就正反两方面陈述出国留学的 利弊，文章必须包括以下要点，
好 处
1 开拓视野，了解不同文化；
2 获取一些先进的知识．
弊 端
1 花费多，开销大；
2 不适应当地生活．
我的观点：…
注意：1）文章不少于 100 字；
 2）不必按照提示逐字翻译，可适当加入自己的观点．
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Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息目前，我们身边到国外留学的学生越来越多，近五年来一直以两位数的比例增长，据统计，2016 年度我国出国留学人员总数为 54.45 万人．请根据这一现象，写一 篇英语作文，题目为：Studying Abroad：Good Or Bad，就正反两方面陈述出国留学的 利弊，文章必须包括以下要点，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，要点包括：好 处 开拓视野，了解不同文化；获取一些先进的知识．弊 端 花费多，开销大；不适应当地生活．我的观点：…2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：Tens of thousands of 成千上万的；the number of …的数目；up to 达到；However然而；Besides另外；As far as I'm concerned，以我的观点来看；
It is believed that there are many advantages in attending schools abroad．（高分句型一）
Second，it can broaden their experience and help them learn much more advanced knowledge of science and technology from foreign countries．（高分句型二）
 As far as I'm concerned，I would like to go further study abroad after graduation from college so that I can make a greater contribution to our country when I come back．（高分句型三）

解答 Studying Abroad：Good Or Bad
      In recent years，studying abroad has been popular．Tens of thousands of Chinese teenagers have gone to foreign countries for further study．The number of the teenagers studying abroad is increasing steadily．At the end of 2016，more than 54.45 million students went to foreign countries to study．
      It is believed that there are many advantages in attending schools abroad．（高分句型一）First，students can learn foreign languages more quickly under favorable conditions．Second，it can broaden their experience and help them learn much more advanced knowledge of science and technology from foreign countries．（高分句型二）
      However，there are some disadvantages．Most of the students studying abroad are too young to live alone without any living experience．Besides，being far away from their home country，they may feel lonely and homesick．Also，the costs are much higher there than in the native country．
      As far as I'm concerned，I would like to go further study abroad after graduation from college so that I can make a greater contribution to our country when I come back．（高分句型三）

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．