Question

15．假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Erica发来邮件，向你询问如何学好中文．请参考以下提示给Erica回复邮件，提出至少4条建议．
邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好．
?take a Chinese course
?watch or listen to Chinese programmes
?visit Chinese website
?…
Dear Erica，
    I was glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on learning Chinese．
Here are my suggestions．To get started，you may take a Chinese course to learn basic knowledge about Chinese characters and grammar rules．（高分句型一）And in your spare time，you canwatch or listen to Chinese programmes on TV or radio as understanding theculture is important for learning the language．（高分句型二）Chinese website is another convenient resource for learning Chinese．Besides，it's a good idea to learn Chinese by learning Chinese songs．Yet，Ithink the most efficient way is to make more Chinese friends．（高分句型三）I'm sure you will learn a lot of colloquial Chinese from talking with them．
    Please do let me know if you need further help．
    Best wishes．
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于开放类作文，根据提示信息给Erica回复邮件，提出至少4条建议，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：take a Chinese course?watch or listen to Chinese programmes?visit Chinese website?…2、图表是文章的总体框架，要在图表的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：ask for advice寻求建议；in your spare time在你空闲时间；Besides另外；
To get started，you may take a Chinese course to learn basic knowledge about Chinese characters and grammar rules．（高分句型一）
And in your spare time，you can watch or listen to Chinese programmes on TV or radio as understanding the culture is important for learning the language．（高分句型二）
Yet，I think the most efficient way is to make more Chinese friends．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Erica，
      I was glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on learning Chinese．
      Here are my suggestions．To get started，you may take a Chinese course to learn basic knowledge about Chinese characters and grammar rules．（高分句型一）And in your spare time，you can watch or listen to Chinese programmes on TV or radio as understanding the culture is important for learning the language．（高分句型二）Chinese website is another convenient resource for learning Chinese．Besides，it's a good idea to learn Chinese by learning Chinese songs．Yet，I think the most efficient way is to make more Chinese friends．（高分句型三）I'm sure you will learn a lot of colloquial Chinese from talking with them．
      Please do let me know if you need further help．
      Best wishes．
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．