Question

18．写一篇介绍自己家乡的短文．字数：100----120．
My home town is a beautiful place．It stands beside a wide river and is rich in hea variety of fishes．But in the old days it was a poor and backward little town．Many people had no work．They lived a hard life．In 1949 my hometown was liberated．Since then great changes have taken place there．The streets have been widened．factories，schools，hospitals，cinemas and theaters have sprung up one after another．The life of the people is greatly improved．I love my hometown and all the people there．They are working hard so as to make it still richer and more beautiful．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇介绍自己家乡的短文．根据题目要求可知用第一人称和一般现在时态．内容包括家乡的位置；过去和现在的对比；对家乡的爱和希望．
高分句型：
1．It stands beside a wide river which is rich in  a variety of fishes．句子里which引导定语从句，代指先行词a wide river．
它位于一条大河边上，河里有各种各样的鱼．
2．They are working hard so as to make it still richer and more beautiful．句子里so as to 表示"为了"，可以用in order to 代替．
为了让它更富有更漂亮，他们正在努力工作．

解答 My home town is a beautiful place．It stands beside a wide river which is rich in a variety of fishes．【高分句型一】（位置） But in the old days it was a poor and backward little town．Many people had no work．They lived a hard life．In 1949 my hometown was liberated．Since then great changes have taken place there．The streets have been widened．and factories，schools，hospitals，cinemas and theaters have sprung up one after another．The life of the people is greatly improved．（过去和现在的对比）I love my hometown and all the people there．They are working hard so as to make it still richer and more beautiful．【高分句型二】（对家乡的爱和希望）

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