Question

【题目】假设你是某中学高三(5)班的班长。你班同学利用课余时间回收废报纸和饮料瓶获得了一笔收入。就如何使用这笔收入，你昨天下午专门组织了一次班会让全班同学进行讨论。请你根据以下讨论结果用英语写一篇班会总结。

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概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

Yesterday afternoon，we held a class meeting discussing how to spend the money our whole class earned by recycling and selling newspapers and plastic bottles after class. Three fifths of the students suggested buying stationery for our own use because it can let us experience the enjoyment of harvest. Meanwhile，it is an approach to encouraging our classmates to continue this action. However，two fifths of the students believed that the money should be donated to the people in the earthquake stricken areas because they need the money more urgently than us. More importantly，it is meaningful to spend the money earned by ourselves in helping others.

【解析】

试题分析：本篇范文要点全面，概括准确，语言通顺连贯，内容全面，段落层次分明，标点符号使用规范。作者首先提出讨论的内容，然后分别讲述了两方面的看法，并且陈述了原因。按照要求使用五个长句简述了要求的内容，很好地完成了写作任务。文中一些副词和连接词Meanwhile，However，More importantly的使用使文章过渡自然，语言流畅。而且文章高级词汇stationery ，urgently和短语experience the enjoyment of harvest，is meaningful to，spend money in doing sth的使用也是文章的亮点所在。