题目内容
【题目】假如你叫李华,你的好朋友张敏来信说每次遇到重要的考试,她都会出现一些焦虑的症状,想让你给她提出一些建议并说明建议的理由。请你用英语给她写一封回信,信的内容包括以下要点:
1.考前制定好复习计划;
2.考试期间正常休息;
3.介绍有助于睡眠的两种方法;
4.希望对方考试顺利。
注意:1.不要逐字翻译,可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
2.字数:100左右。信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇 anxiety n. 焦虑
Dear ZhangMin,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear ZhangMin,
I’m sorry to hear that you are always anxious before important exams. But I don’t think it difficult to get out of such exam anxiety if you can take the following tips.
First of all/To begin with, it’s a good habit to study hard every day and a proper revision schedule may help a lot for the coming exam. In this way, you can avoid suffering from the pressure of exams. Besides/In addition, plenty sleep can make you energetic and enable you to perform well/better in the exam. Therefore, during the period of exams, it is not wise/a good idea to stay up too late. If you can not fall asleep before an exam, why not try a warm bath or a cup of warm milk before going to bed, which may help you to have a sound sleep.
I hope you can find your best state and good luck to your coming exams.
Yours.
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析:本文是提纲类作文,要点已给出,写作时可适当增加细节以使行文连贯,同时要把所提示的点写全,语句通顺,同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词,同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。注意:字数:100左右。信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
【亮点说明】本文是一篇书信。分三段式,格式正确,内容齐全,布局合理,运用高级句子。I’m sorry to hear that you are always anxious before important exams.宾语从句用在句中;But I don’t think it difficult to get out of such exam anxiety if you can take the following tips.条件状语从句和宾语从句结合句中,同时it作形式宾语,动词不定式作真正的宾语;why not try a warm bath or a cup of warm milk before going to bed, which may help you to have a sound sleep. why not结构和which引导的非限制性定语从句同句出现;另外,First of all/To begin with, In this way, Besides/In addition, Therefore,的运用为文章增色添彩。