题目内容
【题目】假如你是李华,你的美国网友Tom想要了解一下你所在学校的校园布局,请你根据下面的简图给他写一封e-mail,描述一下你的学校,并简单表达你对学校的情感。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头语和结束语已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
How I miss you! You asked about the layout of my school and here is a brief introduction.
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I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Best wishes!
Yours
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Tom,
How I miss you! You asked about the layout of my school and here is a brief introduction.
Entering the campus, you will step on the main path leading through the whole campus. On the left of the crossroads is located the laboratory building while our teaching building is on the right. At the end of the main path, you can see the library on the left and the gym is on the opposite side. The football field, where we do sports after class, is between the library and the lab building; the basketball court faces the football field across the main path.
I love my school with students working hard to realize their dreams and teachers helping us like our parents. Provided you can visit my school some day, I will show you around it.
I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Best wishes!
Yours
Li Hua
【解析】文章要求简要介绍校园的设施布局。为图画介绍类文章。文章主要由两个要点,一个是学校介绍,一个是表达对学校的感情。文章用一般现在时,人称用第一人称。此文章的关键点在于准确表达方位。
文章亮点介绍:
1. Entering the campus, you will step on the main path leading through the whole campus.现在分词作状语。
2.倒装句式使句子更高级:On the left of the crossroads is located the laboratory building while our teaching building is on the right.
3.定语从句使句子内容丰富:The football field, where we do sports after class, is between the library and the lab building;
4.with复合结构使句子精炼:I love my school with students working hard to realize their dreams and teachers helping us like our parents.
5.状语从句:Provided you can visit my school some day, I will show you around it.