Question

【题目】随着中国人生活水平的提高，选择到国外去旅行已成为中国人盛行的度假方式之一。但是，有些中国旅行者的不文明行为却给广大的中国人丢尽了脸，如乱丢垃圾、在景区乱写乱画、在公共场所大声喧哗、大声接打手机、在飞机上大打出手等等。请以“Be a Civilized Chinese”为题目，写一篇英语稿件，投给China Daily.

注意：词数100左右。

开头已经给出，不计入总词数。

Be a Civilized Chinese

With the improvement of Chinese people’s living standard, ________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

Be a Civilized Chinese

With the improvement of Chinese people’s living standard, more and more people choose to travel abroad as a way of spending their holidays.

However, some tourists have uncivilized behavior when they are traveling abroad, which greatly makes all of us Chinese ashamed. For example, when they visit some world famous places of interest, they litter here and there. What’s worse, some even carve their names on the trees or statues. Besides, some tourists talk loudly in public places with each other or on their mobile-phones. Worst of all, some passengers on board even fight against each other or with the air-hostesses just because of some inconvenience. These actions show the low quality of some tourists.

As far as I am concerned, it’s the duty of every Chinese to protect the environment and public facilities, no matter where we are traveling. Only in this way can we be civilized Chinese who will win respect from all over the world.

【解析】

试题分析：本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如，用了很多关联词，使文章结构清晰，逻辑明确，如However, For example, Besides, Worst of all, As far as I am concerned,使文章内容更具有层次感，也使语言更加连贯；With the improvement of Chinese people’s living standard, more and more people choose to travel abroad as a way of spending their holidays.用with引导的原因状语从句，突出句子重点，句子结构平衡；Only in this way can we be civilized Chinese who will win respect from all over the world.倒装句结构，变换句子样式，使文章更吸引人。