题目内容
【题目】假如你叫李华。你校近期将举行"小视频大赛 ( Video Contest)"。请你写一封信给在美国的朋友Jim,邀请他参加,并告知相关信息。
内容包括:
1. 作品反映校园生活、家庭生活或家乡的变化等。
2. 视频不超过8分钟。
3. 参赛方式和截止时间。
注意:
1. 词数100左右。
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Jim,
I am writing with good news. A video contest is going to be organized in our school soon, and knowing that you are such an expert in filming videos, I am wondering whether you would like to participate.
Topics like campus life, family life or the great changes that have taken place in your hometown can be covered in the video, which should not be longer than 8 minutes. The deadline is December 10th, 2017, and once you have created your video, you can just upload it to the school website.
It is a good chance to prove your talent in filming as well as an opportunity to share your works with more people. I believe you won’t regret doing it. Wish you good luck!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
本文书面表达属于应用文,要求写一封书信。
第1步:根据提示可知,本篇是一封书信:你校近期将举行"小视频大赛 ( Video Contest)"。请你写一封信给在美国的朋友Jim,邀请他参加,并告知相关信息。
内容包括:1. 作品反映校园生活、家庭生活或家乡的变化等。2. 视频不超过8分钟。
3. 参赛方式和截止时间。第2步:根据写作要求确定关键词,如:A video contest(视频大赛);campus life, family life(校园生活,家庭生活);regret doing(后悔做某事);Wish you good luck!(祝你好运)等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态语态问题。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
本文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。