Question

【题目】假设你是高二学生李明，最近你们年级要举行一次英语演讲比赛，主题为：what’s the best way to travel?”。请你根据下列提示写一篇演讲稿，谈谈自己的看法。

要点提示：

1. 火车旅行安全、舒服、环保、经济实惠，适合家庭旅行乘坐

2. 火车不会让人有时差反应，乘客可以自由走动，也可以更好地欣赏沿途景色

注意：

1. 恰当增加细节，以使行文流畅；

2. 词数120左右

3. 作文中不能提及真实的学校及本人姓名

Answer 1

【答案】

The train is the easiest and most eco-friendly way to get around in the world. Trains allow you to travel in safety and comfort. They pollute less, rarely suffer from weather delays and you can talk to your companions, read a book, have a meal in the dining car, make friends in the bar. Instead of flying over the sights or being stressed while driving, trains provide you with a more pleasant view along the way.

In addition, passengers are allowed to move around from one carriage to another on a train. The ability to move around certainly makes the length of trips more bearable. Cell phones are also permitted.

What’s more, trains are very cheap compared to other means of transport. It may also be an economic choice, especially for families with children, who are usually fascinated by trains .

【解析】

试题分析：文章是一篇提纲类作文，主要就是讲述了乘坐火车旅行的优点。如：安全、舒服、环保、经济实惠，适合家庭旅行乘坐以及不会让人有时差反应，乘客可以自由走动，也可以更好地欣赏沿途景色。除给出的要点外，还要求考生适当增加细节。需要注意的是必须包括所有内容要点，不要逐句翻译。

【亮点说明】本文要点齐全，结构严谨。使用了多种句式，如定语从句：especially for families with children, who are usually fascinated by trains。除此之外，还使用了许多短语，如：get around、suffer from、instead of、in addition、what’s more等等。