Question

11．假如你是李华，你远在美国的笔友Jack对中国的传统节日很感兴趣，他来信询问春节有关情况．请你回复：
1）简单介绍春节
2）春节的时间
3）中国人如何过春节的
4）你对春节的态度
要求：1．词数：120左右
      2．email的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
Dear Jack，
I am glad to tell you something about Chinese Spring Festival．
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Regards!
                                                                    Yours，
                                                                    Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 （高分句型一）On New Year's Eve，people usually gettogether to watch annual Spring Festival Gala Evening on TV while eating delicious food．
该句在讲述中国人过春节时使用了while引导的时间状语从句，突出一边看春节晚会一边吃美食．
（高分句型二）I like the Spring Festival very much because I can set off fireworks and get pocket money from my parents and relatives as well．
该句型在表达自己对春节的喜欢时使用because引导的原因状语从句，告诉我们喜欢的原因，如放烟火，拿到压岁钱．
重点单词：fall on降落在；decorate装饰；get together聚会；set off引爆；

解答 Dear Jack，
    Thanks for your e-mail．I'm glad to tell you something about China's Spring Festival．
    As you know，（此处介绍春节的地位）the Spring Festival is the most important festival in China，just like Christmas in the west．It falls on the last day of the lunar year and lasts until the Lantern Festival．
     Before the festival comes，（介绍中国人如何过春节）people clean and decorate their houses to welcome the New Year．On New Year's Eve，i（高分句型一）people usually gettogether to watch annual Spring Festival Gala Evening on TV while eating delicious food．During the festival，people go from house to house to pay a New Year visit to their relatives and friends．
    As a child，（我的态度）I like the Spring Festival very much （高分句型二）because I can set off fireworks and get pocket money from my parents and relatives as well．
     How do you like the Spring Festival？I look forward to hearing from you．
Yours，
Li Hua

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