Question

短文改错

假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中有10处错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从11处起)不计分。

　　With the development of the Internet, more and more people send e-cards instead paper ones when a important holiday comes．

　　Comparing with the traditional cards, e-cards are more interested．Besides, it is faster to send an e-card．The next advantage is that there are many web site online in which there are many cards for you to choose from．Final, with the popularity of e-cards, more paper is used in making paper cards, that does good to our environment．

　　In the short, there are many advantages of using e-cards．I hoped that sending greetings by using e-cards will be accepted by more people, not only the young ones．

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