题目内容
【题目】如今,外出旅游已成为时尚。下面的部分物品可能是你旅游时必备的。请你选择至少最重要的五种物品,并说出理由。字数100字左右。
Documents | ID card, passport |
Clothes | sweater, coat, walking, shoes |
Articles | medicine, umbrella, vacuum bottle(热水瓶) |
Equipment | mobile phone, compass |
Books | guidebook, map, magazine |
Other things | camera, CD player, Mp3 |
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【答案】While traveling, I always take the following things with me, which are my ID card, a camera, a compass, a CD player and some clothes. I think the ID card is a basic and necessary document, and it is a must for tourists wherever they go. The camera is used to take pictures or record what we have done during the trip, and it can bring us a lot of fun. The compass is very essential for us to travel in the forests. Without it, we may get lost. And then the CD player, I think, is also very important for me to kill the time when on the train or the plane. What’s more, I have to bring one or two coats when traveling to a different place. In a word, among all the above, I think the ID card is the most important.
【解析】本文为一篇说明文,注意详细描写说明对象,不要丢掉要点。
开篇点名主旨,说清楚当旅游时,你所必备的东西。例如:when I go on a trip,I need to take......with me。根据题目要求,至少要说出五样必备品。例如ID card, passport,medicine,guidebook,camera,等等
3,分别叙述为什么你所选择的东西是旅游的必备品,注意详略得当,例如:the reason why I take ID card with me is because......;I think the map is most important......;without phone ,we may lost......
文末再次强调最重要的必备品,如:就我个人而言,手机是最重要的personally,the mobile phone is the most important thing to take with when travel。
【范文亮点】
1.while引导的时间状语从句:While traveling, I always take the following things with me,
2.非限定性定语从句:which are my ID card, a camera, a compass, a CD player and some clothes. 高级句式,增强文章逻辑性。
3.连接词的使用:What’s more;In a word, among all the above,使文章结构更清晰有条理。