Question

【题目】近年来，微信(Wechat)成为了人们非常喜欢的通信工具，但是也给人们带来一些困扰。请对这一现象谈一下自己的看法，内容包括1.使用微信的利与弊；2.自己的看法和建议。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2. 为使行文连贯可适当增加细节。

In recent years, Wechat is becoming increasingly popular. _________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】In recent years, Wechat is becoming increasingly popular. There are many reasons for Wechat to be known. To begin with, Wechat is a relatively cheap way of communication, which cuts down the cost of making a phone call. Next, Wechat is to the taste of the majority of people, especially the youth, with its various functions. Furthermore, it is available everywhere at any time.

However, every coin has two sides. Firstly, our identity can be revealed and we can be in trouble. Moreover, spending too much time on your screen will do great harm to your health. Finally, our attention might be drawn too much to focus on study.

There is no doubt that Wechat will improve as time goes by.

【解析】本文属于正反观点对比的议论文。正反观点对比类的文章，首先要抓住要点，构思文章结构—提出问题—正反观点对比—说明自己的观点。

就本文来说，写作步骤如下：

1. 先提出话题，微信近来日益受到大家的欢迎。

2. 然后分析微信的利与弊。

3. 提出自己的观点。

4.连句成篇，注意用上恰当的连接词。

【本文亮点】1、文章思路清晰，第一段写微信的优点，第二段写它的缺点，第三段提出自己的观点。第一、二两段都是开头先用主题句引领全段，然后举例来证明观点。2、连接词的运用也是一大亮点，如：to begin with, next, furthermore, firstly, moreover, finally等的使用，使得文章紧凑有条理。还有，不同观点之间的衔接使用到位，however, each coin has two sides，花开两朵，各表一枝。