Question

请根据下面这幅漫画写一篇150词左右的短文。

要求：

1. 请阐述温室效应所产生的原因。

2. 简述其后果，应尽可能涵盖图中所有信息（至少谈及三个方面）。

3. 我们该怎么办？

These years, global warming is becoming a serious problem, endangering people’s life.      

                                                                               

                                                                               

                                                                               

                                                                               

                                                                               

                                                                               

 

Answer 1

【答案】

不唯一

These years, global warming is becoming a serious problem, endangering people’s life.

Several factors contribute to the rise of temperature. First of all, a lot of greenhouse gas is produced by cars and factories; further more, people burn a lot of coal and wood for their life; the loss of forests is another cause of global warming.

Global warming will cause some harmful effects. In the first place, some islands will disappear because of the rise of sea level, and thus people of certain countries will have to look for new places to live. Extreme weather, will also result from global warming. When temperature rises, the production of crops will decrease, which directly endangers people’s lives. If the temperature keeps rising, some animals and plants will disappear from the planet, thus destroying the ecosystem.

Facing such a threat, we should join efforts to ‘cool’ the earth. For example, we can take a subway or bus to work instead of driving private cars to reduce greenhouse gas. All in all, we are supposed to remember it’s our responsibility to save our earth.  （168 words）

【解析】

试题分析：写漫画作文首先要仔细观察画面内容，要观察图画的全貌，要观察背景与人物，要观察图画的细节，还要分清主次。第二，要深入体会图画作者的创作意图，要知道作者在提倡什么，反对什么，颂扬什么讽刺什么，这样在写作时才能把握的准确。第三，要根据观察、体会发挥自己的想象与联想，把作文写充实、写生动。第四，要明确作文写作的目的要求，做到作文与要求相符。

考点：这是一篇议论文。

点评：考生要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，尽可能的使用较复杂的句子结构，尽量使用高级词汇以便得到较高的分数。考生注意使用过渡词或者过渡句来使文章读起来比较流畅。动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作练习以外，还可以适当背诵一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。