Question

7．健康对我们来说非常重要，我们可以用很多方法来保持身体健康．请根据下面表格的提示，以"Good Ways to Keep Healthy"为题，写一篇100词左右的短文，倡议"健康生活"，从三个方面说明如何保持健康．短文首句已给出，不计入总词数，可适当发挥．
1    food             a balanced diet，vegetables，fruit，less meat…
2    exercise       do more exercise，take a walk，play ball games…
3    happiness    keep happy，make friends，smile…
Good Ways to Keep Healthy
It is very important for us to keep healthy．But do you know the ways to keep us healthy？（点明文章主题）
First，we need to have healthy eating habits，which means we can eat a lotof vegetables and fresh fruit，but we'd better eat less meat．Different kinds of food are necessary，and it's also important to eat a balanced diet．Then，playing sports every day can also help us keep fit．We can take walks after dinner，we can walk to school instead of taking a bus，and after school we can spend hours playing basketball or soccer with our friends．We should try to do more exercise every day．Above all，happiness is another way to keep healthy．When we are lonely or unhappy，try to make friends．It is a good way to keep us happy．If you smile often，you also feel happy．So，being happy is to be healthy．（保持身体健康的方法）．

Answer 1

分析 这是倡议"健康生活"的一篇作文．根据题目要求可知用第一人称和一般现在时态．内容包括：一点明文章主题；二保持身体健康的方法．
高分句型：
1．First，we need to have healthy eating habits，which means we can eat a lot of vegetables and fresh fruit，but that we'd better eat less meat句子里．First用于列举，和下面的Then，Above all呼应；which引导非限制性定语从句，代指主句we need to have healthy eating habits； we can eat a lot of vegetables and fresh fruit，but that we'd better eat less meat是并列的宾语从句．
首先，我们需要饮食健康，这就意味着我们要吃大量的新鲜蔬菜和水果，但是最好少吃肉．
2．Then，playing sports every day can also help us keep fit．句子里动名词playing sports every day 做主语；keep fit做宾补，表示"保持健康"．
然后，每天运动也能够有助于我们保持健康．

解答 Good Ways to Keep Healthy
    It is very important for us to keep healthy．But do you know the ways to keep us healthy？（点明文章主题）
    First，we need to have healthy eating habits，which means we can eat a lot of vegetables and fresh fruit，but we'd better eat less meat．【高分句型一】Different kinds of food are necessary，and it's also important to eat a balanced diet．Then，playing sports every day can also help us keep fit．【高分句型二】We can take walks after dinner，we can walk to school instead of taking a bus，and after school we can spend hours playing basketball or soccer with our friends．We should try to do more exercise every day．Above all，happiness is another way to keep healthy．When we are lonely or unhappy，try to make friends．It is a good way to keep us happy．If you smile often，you also feel happy．So，being happy is to be healthy．（保持身体健康的方法）

点评 考查开放类作文．
写作文时，一定要切题，抓住中心，紧扣要点．不要任意发挥，画蛇添足，也不要丢三落四，要点不全．通过对众多提示或图画、图表的观察和分析，获取与写作内容有关的主要信息，并按一定的逻辑顺序排列起来，找出最密切相关的要点，列出写作提纲．在体裁明确、中心突出、要点清晰的前提下，应该选择自己最熟悉、最有把握的词语、句型，将要点逐条表达出来．表达时应该综合运用所掌握的知识，避开生僻的词汇，并克服母语的干扰，按照英语的习惯方式，用地道的英语表达出来，力求做到语言准确无误．