Question

13．假设你是李华，你的朋友Tom原计划暑假来你所在的城市旅游，为此你提前为他在一家酒店预定了一个房间，但他来电说因故要推迟一周．请给美籍酒店负责人写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1．表示歉意；
2．说明情况；
3．改定日期．
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数．
Dear Sir or Madam，
I booked a room in your hotel for my friend Tom yesterday．But I am really sorry to tell you that I want to change my booking now．（高分句型一）
My friend Tom had planned to visit our city this summer vocation．So Room 101 was scheduled for him．However，I was informed yesterday that he had an important thing to deal with，so he couldn't come as planned．（高分句型二）He had to change the booking date for the room．I would appreciate it if you could push the booking date back a week at your earliest convenience．（高分句型三）Thanks again．I hope this will not cause you any trouble．
I am looking forward to your early reply．
Yours sincerely，
LiHua．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一封电子邮件，属于提纲式作文．考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系，然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态．根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来．写作时注意时态、语态的合理运用，主次分明，详略得当，语言力求准确、简洁．根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料．同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
【亮点说明】
本文是一封电子邮件，格式正确，内容齐全，结构布局合理，同时使用高级句子．I am really sorry to tell you that I want to change my booking now．宾语从句用在句中；My friend Tom had planned to visit our city this summer vocation．这种带虚拟语气的过去完成时态的运用，堪称经典；so he couldn't come as planned．省略句恰到好处；I would appreciate it if you could push the booking date back a week at your earliest convenience．it做形式宾语，后面的从句是真正的宾语．
But I am really sorry to tell you that I want to change my booking now．（高分句型一）
However，I was informed yesterday that he had an important thing to deal with，so he couldn't come as planned．（高分句型二）
I would appreciate it if you could push the booking date back a week at your earliest convenience．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Sir or Madam，
       I booked a room in your hotel for my friend Tom yesterday．But I am really sorry to tell you that I want to change my booking now．（高分句型一）
       My friend Tom had planned to visit our city this summer vocation．So Room 101 was scheduled for him．However，I was informed yesterday that he had an important thing to deal with，so he couldn't come as planned．（高分句型二）He had to change the booking date for the room．I would appreciate it if you could push the booking date back a week at your earliest convenience．（高分句型三）Thanks again．I hope this will not cause you any trouble．
       I am looking forward to your early reply．
                                                                                                                                                                                       Yours sincerely，
                                                                                                                                                                                              Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．