Question

写作（满分30分）

假设你是新华中学的学生李华，不久前某英语杂志社举办“ 建设节约型校园 ”征文比赛。请你根据以下提示用英语写一篇短文：

1. 学校里浪费的现象，如水、电与餐厅食物等；

2. 浪费造成的危害；

3. 你的建议与措施。

注意：1. 词数：120-150；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

不唯一

Building up a Saving Campus

Our school campus is becoming more and more beautiful. But did you notice with the improvement of people’s living standard, how much is wasted on campus? For example, some students leave the lights on in the daytime, waste running water after washing dishes. In the dining hall, you can see a lot of food thrown away every day.

The habit of being wasteful has a bad effect on our character. We have to pay for those things wasted, and this adds to our expense. What is worse, we are wasting the earth’s resource. So it’s high time we dealt with this problem.

How to reduce the waste? In my opinion, it is everybody’s duty to save energy and resources. We must start with ourselves and from now! Then our society will go on developing and our life will be better.

【解析】

试题分析：考生应不难理解写作要求和写作目的，短文的开头语要写好，要适时地引导要点上去。考生首先要仔细审题，包括以下几个方面：（1）层次结构（2）语气（3）内容要点。尤其是内容要点要把握准确到位，这是半开放性作文，要点需要考生拿捏准确以及正确，这加大了写作难度。再者考生要注意尽可能使句子的表达形式多样化，适当的使用一些高级句式和高级词汇，以提高书面表达的档次和可读性。

考点：提纲作文。

点评：作文要层次清晰，要点全面，表达流畅，切合作文要求，语气诚恳。文中使用一些极佳的词语和句子为文章增色，使用高级词汇及句型。