Question

【题目】假如你叫李华，你的朋友Jenny来信向你询问如何保持健康。请你给他发一封E-mail提些建议。内容要点如下：

1. 注意合理饮食,多吃水果蔬菜；

2. 保证充足睡眠，至少8小时；

3. 坚持锻炼身体，多参加体育运动。

注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.可适当增添细节，以使行文连贯；

3.邮件的开头结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Dear Jenny,

How nice to hear from you! In your letter you asked me how to keep healthy. I would like to give you some advice.

Yours

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Jenny,

How nice to hear from you! In your letter you asked me how to keep healthy. I would like to give you some advice.

We know, food is of great importance to us teenagers. Since we grow very fast , we are in need of nutritious food , such as fresh vegetables, fruits, fish, meat and so on. However, I think you’d better not eat food with much sugar and fat. And you should get plenty of sleep, which is necessary for you to have at least eight hours of sleep every day. In addition, you should take physical exercise regularly. It will be beneficial to your health. Only in this way can you keep fit.

Best wishes!

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。

【亮点说明】本文语言丰富，注意使用不同的表达方式。如food is of great importance to us teenagers.、which is necessary for you 、 It will be beneficial to your health.，这几个句子使用了不同的短语表达了相似的意思。最后一句 Only in this way can you keep fit.用了一个倒装句，同时又再次点明主题。