Question

某英文报就近年来我国学生出国留学低龄化的利弊在报上展开讨论，希望广大读者畅所欲言，就此事发表自己的看法。假设你是中学生李华，请用英语给编辑写一封信，谈谈你的看法。既可以赞同，也可以反对，但必须说明理由。120字左右。

　　(注意：信的开头已给出，字数不计算在内。)

Dear editor,

I’m writing to tell you about my opinion on Chinese students going abroad for further studies at an early age.

 

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Dear editor,

　　I'm writing to tell you my opinion on Chinese students going abroad for further studies at an early age.

　　I agree that Chinese students going to study abroad is a good thing, which helps us to know more about foreign countries, but I don't think it necessary for us to do that so early.

　　The education in China and that in foreign countries both have advantages and disadvantages. The most important thing for us Chinese students to do at present is to know our country, people and culture well. Without that, we'll have no root and cannot have a good understanding of other countries, people and cultures.

　　Besides, going to study in foreign countries at too early an age not only costs a lot of money, it could also bring serious problems. Taking care of themselves is one of them.

　　In my opinion, as primary or middle school students, we should devote our time to studying harder in our own country and improving ourselves, when the chance to study abroad arrives, we'll grasp it and make the best use

【解析】这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。

【亮点说明】范文提到一些常用短语如at present目前 have a good understanding of  有某方面知识In my opinion  在我看来devote our time to 致力于 。I agree that Chinese students going to study abroad is a good thing, which helps us to know more about foreign countries, but I don't think it necessary for us to do that so early.这本句话中提到which引导非限制性定语从句，but引导的转折句，think it adj for sb to do 认为某事对某人来说如何。The most important thing for us Chinese students to do at present is to know our country, people and culture well.这句话中to do 做表语。In my opinion, as primary or middle school students, we should devote our time to studying harder in our own country and improving ourselves,，and连接study 和improve并列，时态保持一致。本文还运用许多连词如 besides when but 使文章连贯很强的逻辑性。

考点： 提纲类作文