Question

【题目】假设你是学生李华，得知好朋友William在学习中感到压力很大，学习效果甚微，请你按照以下要点给他写一封电子邮件，帮助他放松身心，提高学习效率。

1. 快乐学习，保持愉快的心情；

2. 积极参加体育活动，听听歌曲音乐；

3. 多与同学交流，互相鼓励。

注意：1. 词数100左右，开头和结尾已经为你写好(不记入总词数)，但不得抄入答题卡内 。

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear William，

Recently, I have heard that you feel stressed about study. I have a good mind to offer you some advice on how to study effectively.

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear William，

Recently, I have heard that you feel stressed about study. I have a good kind to offer you some advice on how to study effectively.

First of all, learn in a relaxing way. This will remove our pressure, making study an easy job. One way to keep up our spirits is to take part in sports. Not only does exercise build up the body, but also it provides us time to relax and fresh our mind. In this way we can memorize things faster and longer. Music, too, is another effective means of refreshing and helping us concentrate better.

Last but not least, we should exchange ideas with our classmates. Through the communication we can find support, which will encourage us to overcome difficulties in our study. Keep trying, and we will make it.

I hope all these can benefit you.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：假设你是学生李华，得知好朋友William在学习中感到压力很大，学习效果甚微，请你按照以下要点给他写一封电子邮件，帮助他放松身心，提高学习效率。1. 快乐学习，保持愉快的心情；2. 积极参加体育活动，听听歌曲音乐；3. 多与同学交流，互相鼓励。写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。注意：1. 词数100左右，开头和结尾已经为你写好(不记入总词数)，但不得抄入答题卡内 。2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【亮点说明】本文内容齐全，结构严谨，层次分明，布局合理，语言精练，同时运用高级句子。现在分词做结果状语：This will remove our pressure, making study an easy job；倒装句的使用：Not only does exercise build up the body, but also it provides us time to relax and fresh our mind.非限制性定语从句的使用：Through the communication we can find support, which will encourage us to overcome difficulties in our study.固定句型的使用：Keep trying, and we will make it.连接词的使用使得文章结构层次清楚明了：First of all, Last but not least。