题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华。你校太极拳社团(Tai Ji Club)正在招募(recruit)新成员。美国交换生Tim一直热衷于中国太极拳,请给他写封邮件,告诉他相关情况。内容包括:
1. 社团成立时间、目的;
2.即将开展的活动;
3. 报名方式:TaiJiClub.@sina.com
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。太极拳:Taijiquan
Dear Tim,
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Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Tim,
Learning that Chinese Tai Ji appeals to you a lot. I want to share with you the exciting news that our school Tai Ji Club is recruiting new members now.
The club was set up three years ago to spread Taijiquan, a kind of Chinese martial arts, which is practiced in China for a number of reasons, such as self-defence, spiritual development as well as entertainment. In the near future, the club is to organize a grand Taijiquan performance in celebration of our school’s 100th anniversary. Additionally, you can get access to classic Taiji movies in the club at weekends. Of course you will make many friends.
Don’t hesitate and you can sign up via email at TaijiClub.@sina.com. I bet it will be an impressive and everlasting experience for you.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】试题这是一封电子邮件,叙述太极拳社团成立的时间应该用一般过去时,说明即将开展的活动应该用一般将来时,也可以be to do表示计划安排好的活动;可以适当增加一些细节,比如活动的意义给对方带来的好处等。
写作亮点:短文要点齐全,层次清晰,用了一些短语和句式,如:share sth with sb和某人分享某事;be to do sth表示计划要做的事情;get access to获得,接近;sign up注册。The club was set up three years ago to spread Taijiquan, a kind of Chinese martial arts, which is practiced in China for a number of reasons, such as self-defence, spiritual development as well as entertainment.这是高分句型,用了which引导的非限制性定语从句;I bet it will be an impressive and everlasting experience for you.这里是that(省略)引导的宾语从句。为了上下文的衔接用了Additionally等,增加了文章的亮点。