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5．每位同学都希望自己具有良好的人际关系，成为班级中受欢迎的人．请你根据下表所提供的信息，写一篇题为"Being a Popular Student"的英语短文，参加学校网站英语论坛的讨论．
受人喜爱的个性品质对待集体热心班级活动，具有团队精神，工作负责，…
对待他人尊重、关心他人，富有同情心，…
对待自己（请考生自己实际拟定内容，列举至少两点） …

注意：1．对所给要点，逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译．
2．词数150左右．开头已经写好，不计入总词数．

Being a Popular Student
We all hope to be popular with our classmates and teachers
                                  

Answer 1

分析 每位同学都希望自己具有良好的人际关系，成为班级中受欢迎的人．请你根据下表所提供的信息，写一篇题为"Being a Popular Student"的英语短文，参加学校网站英语论坛的讨论．受人喜爱的个性品质：对待集体---热心班级活动，具有团队精神，工作负责，…；对待他人---尊重、关心他人，富有同情心，…；对待自己---（请考生自己实际拟定内容，列举至少两点） …．写作时对所给要点，逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯．写作时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系．根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩．注意：词数150左右．开头已经写好，不计入总词数．
【亮点说明】To enjoy popularity，we are supposed to regard the class as our big family and even offer to sacrifice our personal interests whenever necessary．开头运用了动词不定式做目的状语，并在句尾使用了省略；While taking an active part in all our class activities，we should work responsibly to build up a good reputation as a team．引导词加现在分词运用恰如其分；To be a popular student，we ought to be strict with ourselves in everything we do at school and make every effort to achieve all-round development，being good not only at our lessons but also at sports，music，painting，social services and so on．定语从句和现在分词作状语在句中巧妙结合；All in all，popularity among classmates and teachers comes naturally to those who keep improving their personal qualities．句中运用了定语从句；另外，文章中还使用了As a result、be strict with、In time of success、All in all等高级词组，使文章更加丰富多彩．

解答 Being a Popular Student
    We all hope to be popular with our classmates and teachers．To enjoy popularity，we are supposed to regard the class as our big family and even offer to sacrifice our personal interests whenever necessary．（高分句型一）While taking an active part in all our class activities，we should work responsibly to build up a good reputation as a team．（高分句型二）（受人喜爱的个性品质）
    To be students with high popularity，we are to show respect，concern and sympathy for others．（高分句型三）As a result，we never hesitate to lend a hand to those in need．（对待他人）
    To be a popular student，we ought to be strict with ourselves in everything we do at school and make every effort to achieve all-round development，being good not only at our lessons but also at sports，music，painting，social services and so on．（高分句型三）In time of success we remain modest，while in time of difficulty we keep strong-minded．（对待自己）
    All in all，popularity among classmates and teachers comes naturally to those who keep improving their personal qualities．（高分句型四）

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．