题目内容
【题目】假设你是高三学生李津，你的加拿大笔友Daniel来信向你求助。他最近和妈妈闹矛盾，因为妈妈不让他过多上网。他对此很不理解。请你给他写一封回信，要点如下：
(1) 建议他向妈妈道歉；
(2) 说明过多上网的危害；
(3) 列举一些健康的休闲方式。
注意：(1) 词数不少于100；
(2) 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯；
(3) 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Daniel，
I’m very sorry to hear that a conflict occurred between you and your mother because of your Internet addiction. ________________________________________________________
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Yours，
Li Jin
【答案】Dear Daniel，
I’m very sorry to hear that a conflict occurred between you and your mother because of your Internet addiction.
` In my opinion, you should apologize to your mother, as she has done nothing wrong to prevent you from Internet addiction. Although the Internet plays an important role in modern life, we can’t ignore its harm to us. Many students spend most of their time playing computer games or chatting aimlessly with others, which may not only result in poor health but also lead to decline in study as well as loss of communication in the real world.
As students, we should devote our energy to study, when available, you may as well walk outside with your friends or take some exercise to keep fit instead of playing online games, only in this way can you live and study happily and healthily.
Yours，
Li Jin
【解析】这是一篇提纲类作文。文章内容要点已经给出。同学们在写这篇文章时，要注意以下几点：1. 通篇以一般现在时态为主。2. 要点要齐全。但是不要对要点进行简单的罗列。可以使用适当的连接词，使上下文行文流畅，衔接自然流程。3.
注意语气。该文主要是对笔友上网问题的劝导和建议，言辞要恳切。难点在说明上网的危害这一点上。一定要通过简单的例子作为支撑。否则会显得说服力不够，内容不够丰满。写这部分内容时，学生可以采取简单句和复合句结合的方法。
【范文亮点】
1. 范文采取了“I’m very sorry to……”“……do nothing wrong to……”“only in this way can you……”“apologize to”“result in”“lead to”“devote energy to”“take some exercise to”等经典的句式和短语。
2.范文思路清晰，结构严谨，长短句结合，语句流畅明快，值得同学们借鉴和学习。
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