Question

你班计划举行一次以My Dream 为主题的班会。假如然你发言谈谈你的理想，请你按下列要求写一篇演讲稿。字数：100-120.   要点提示：
1.我决定当一名教师，这意志是我孩提时代的梦想； 2.我认为和孩子们在一起是无比快乐辛福的；3.目前我国教师奇缺，相当教师的人不多；4.尽管教师工作辛苦，而我却决心致力于教育事业。
My Dream
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Answer 1

My Dream
Dear classmates, I’m very glad to have a chance to talk with you about my dream here. Everyone has a dream. But what is mine? My dream is to be a teacher in the future. Is it surprising? In fact, I began to have this dream when I was still a child because I love children. To me, it means happiness to be with them. As we all know, teachers are badly needed in our country, but not many of us want to be teachers. Although it takes hard work to be a teacher, I’m determined to give all my life to the cause of education. 

解析试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。
考点：提纲类作文
点评：本文属于提纲类作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。