Question

【题目】书面表达

假如你是李华，你的朋友Tom邀请你下周去他们学校参加文化交流活动并向外国朋友介绍中国的传统绘画。 但你忙于准备期末考试，不得不谢绝邀请。请根据下面的要点用英语写一封信：

1. 谢绝邀请；

2. 说明理由；

3. 推荐朋友Mary参加，并说明原因。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 信的开头和结尾以为你写好（不计入总词数）。

Dear Tom,

Thank you very much for your invitation. ______________________________

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Tom,

Thank you very much for your invitation. I’d like to accept it and take this opportunity to introduce the traditional Chinese painting to foreign friends, but I’m sorry to inform you that I can’t.

The reason is that I am busy preparing myself for the coming final examination. I strongly recommend my friend Mary, who is the most suitable choice to take my place next week. She began to learn painting at an early age and has a good knowledge of the traditional Chinese painting, which, together with her active personality and perfect spoken English, will help to make your activity a success.

Sorry again for any inconvenience caused by my absence. Best wishes.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：假如你是李华，你的朋友Tom邀请你下周去他们学校参加文化交流活动并向外国朋友介绍中国的传统绘画。 但你忙于准备期末考试，不得不谢绝邀请。写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。注意：1. 词数100左右。2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【亮点说明】文章感情充沛，理由描述恰当，行文流畅；The reason is that I am busy preparing myself for the coming final examination.运用that从句； I strongly recommend my friend Mary, who is the most suitable choice to take my place next week. 运用定语从句；同时运用高档词汇，例如 has a good knowledge of：精通；掌握；对…很熟悉I’d like to accept it and take this opportunity to introduce the traditional Chinese painting to foreign friends, but I’m sorry to inform you that I can’t.此句式为文章增色，显得文章很有档次。