Question

8．假设你是晨光中学学生李津，你校英籍教师Lucy近期准备回英国度假，你班同学准备举行晚会为她送行．请根据以下提示用英语写一封邮件，邀请她参加晚会．
（1）表示感谢；
（2）晚会时间和地点；
（3）活动内容．
注意：
（1）词数不少于100；
（2）请适当增加细节，使内容充实，行文连贯．
Dear Lucy，
We hear that you'll return to the Untied Kingdom on holiday soon．All the class will miss you very much when you are on leave!
Firstly，I'd like to express our gratitude for your excellent teaching in our school and your care and love for our class!So we′ve decided to have a farewell party this Saturday for you．The party will start at 6：30 on Saturday evening in the classroom of Class 12，Grade 3 and will probably last about an hour．All of the class hope you can join us singing some English songs and have a good time together．At the end of the party，the monitor will present you with some flowers and gifts，which are mostly made by ourselves．
We wish you a good journey back home!We are also expecting you to come back to China soon．I am looking forward to receiving your early reply．
Yours
Li Jin．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达是一篇提纲作文．提纲作文写作的时候注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点．2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
       本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构．比如We hear that you'll return to the Untied Kingdom on holiday soon．I'd like to express our gratitude for your excellent teaching in our school and your care and love for our class．We are also expecting you to come back to China soon等等．which are mostly made by ourselves是非限制性定语从句，此外，文章还使用了 Firstly，So，At the end of the party等，这样的关联词使文章内容更具有层次感，也使内容更加连贯．

解答 Dear Lucy，
    We hear that you'll return to the Untied Kingdom on holiday soon．（高分句型一）All the class will miss you very much when you are on leave!
    Firstly，I'd like to express our gratitude for your excellent teaching in our school and your care and love for our class!So we′ve decided to have a farewell party this Saturday for you．The party will start at 6：30 on Saturday evening in the classroom of Class 12，Grade 3 and will probably last about an hour．All of the class hope you can join us singing some English songs and have a good time together．At the end of the party，the monitor will present you with some flowers and gifts，which are mostly made by ourselves．（高分句型二）
    We wish you a good journey back home!We are also expecting you to come back to China soon．I am looking forward to receiving your early reply．
Yours
 Li Jin

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．