Question

阅读下面微博上的短文，然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。  

I have know Li Yong, my friend, since my childhood and we have been studying in the same class of the same middle school, so we have been together almost every day and have built up very close friendship.
Li Yong actually used to be a good example for me to follow because be was a top student in study and got along very well with us fellow classmates. He was once responsible, active, positive and s army guy street with himself, so both teachers and classmates thought well of him. However, 3 months ago, everything changed. He often came late for class. When at class, be often did something that had mouthing to do with study. Last week, he even fought with a student of another class over a very small thing, which had a very bad influence on our class. He let us all a little bit down!
But this afternoon, when school was over, he was alone in the classroom, writing something with a knife on his desk. Coming closer to him I found carved on the desk were the words: “For my class, I must change! Action speaks louder than words.” From these words I could read his determined mind, which make me moved, while at the same time, it seemed as if the desk were crying and wanted to say something to him because of the carving.
[写作内容]
1．以约30个词概括以上博文的主要内容。
2．然后以约120个词就李勇的做法发表你的看法，内容包括：
（1）李华为何因李勇的行为而感动，并说明其理由；
（2）假如你是“课桌”，你想对李勇说什么，为什么？
（3）作为学生，你是如何为班级做出自己的贡献的？
[写作要求]
1．作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。
2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
[评分标准]
概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。

Answer 1

Li Yong, once a good student, became a very disappointing one. Having realized that, he carved some encouraging words on the desk to show his determination, which gave Li Hua a mixed feeling. 
Li Hua, a good friend of Li Yong’s, was moved by his words, for the words showed he has realized his fault and decided to change. It also shows he is responsible and can face his mistakes bravely.
However, curving on a desk is not right at all. If I were the desk, I would tell him: the knife carving hurts me and makes me look ugly. As the public property of our school, you should love me. You said action speaks louder than words. Why not keep the words in mind and take actions to behave well?
As teenage students, we must remember that study comes first. So I often help my classmates with difficulty so that we can make progress together. Also we should encourage each other so as to make our class a better one. Only in this way, can we be good students in school, and make great contribution to the country in the future. 

解析试题分析：首先概括该故事的内容要点（约30个词），故事的概括要简练，不要照抄原文。要用三人称进行概述。进而找到中心论点：自己对李勇的做法的看法，一分为二的看待该问题。其中包括：（1）因李勇的行为而感动，并说明其理由（值得肯定的方面）；（２）对“刻字表决心”的不赞同的方面，具体写如何劝诫李勇及原因。（3）最后陈述自己的观点（结论）
：如何为班级做出自己的贡献。
考点：观点类议论文的写作。
点评：写作时认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。观点类议论文的写作的文章总体结构：一是概括所给短文内容要点二要正反方面论述对问题的看法，（一分为二，肯定的方面及否定的方面）并分析说明理由。三是自己的观点（结论）