题目内容
【题目】书面表达(共1小题)
请你根据以下要点,拟一则有关家教的招聘启事。
1.家教老师(英语)必须是一位男性,年龄在30岁左右;
2.必须具有教师经历,且有耐心和信心;
3.工作时间是每周星期六、日,每天8小时,待遇丰厚;
4.联系电话是8101688。
1.标题已为你写好;
2.可适当发挥;
词数:100左右.
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【答案】Help WantedI want an English teacher aged about 30 to teach my son at home. If you are or used to be a teacher as well as have patience and confidence, you are my best choice.You should work at my home from Saturday to Sunday, 8 hours per day. Of course, you may stay up for the night, if you like. In spite of this, you are sure to get good wages.What do you think of it? You are welcome to call 8101688 at any time except at night.
【解析】请你根据以下要点,拟一则有关家教的招聘启事。1. 家教老师(英语)必须是一位男性,年龄在30岁左右;2. 必须具有教师经历,且有耐心和信心;3. 工作时间是每周星期六、日,每天8小时,待遇丰厚;4. 联系电话是8101688。要把所提示的点写全,把汉语翻译成通顺的英语句子,可根据内容要点适当增加细节,写作时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。避免全部使用简单句,根据句意适当使用并列连词,同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩,注意要求的字数在100词左右,不要太多或太少。要求文章语言简练,层次分明。
亮点说明I want an English teacher aged about 30 to teach my son at home.此句使用了过去分词作后置定语;If you are or used to be a teacher as well as have patience and confidence, you are my best choice.句中运用了条件状语从句;Of course, you may stay up for the night, if you like.句中条件状语从句的运用,使文章个性鲜明;In spite of this, you are sure to get good wages. 高级词组In spite of的出现,使文章顺畅自然;What do you think of it? You are welcome to call 8101688 at any time except at night.最后问句的恰当运用,更是文章的一大特色,另外,介词except的巧妙运用更是难得一见。