Question

19．阅读下面短文，然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文
Some post-80s graduates have given up the dream of working in a big city，and heading back home has become part of future job consideration．Two of the more common ones are trying to avoid the intense competition and the pressure，and seeing unprecedented opportunities in the growing economies back home．
Changping．a 22-year-old student from Hainan University，said that if he would decide on starting his business，he'd certainly return to his hometown，Xiangfan，in Hubei Province．That was because he has his own network of people who could help him in every way．Also，he could get some good business ideas like setting up advanced kindergartens in small cities．If no one was doing that，the chance of being successful seemed higher．
But Chen Haihua，a college student from Guangzhou Medical College，said that she would plan to stick to a big city，Guangzhou，instead of going back to her hometown，Zhanjiang，in Guangdong Province．She wanted to struggle in the big city for a more exciting，better life．She explained that she also could be a role model，letting the kids in her hometown work hard Io go to key universities．
[写作内容]
1）以约30个词概括该短文的内容；
2）然后以约120个词谈谈你对就业方向的看法，内容包括：
①试分析在大城市和回家乡就业各自的有利因素；
②如果你大学毕业了，你会选择在哪里就业？
③选择的理由．
[写作要求]
1）作文中可以使用自己的亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子
2）作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；
[评分标准]
概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇迮贯．

Answer 1

分析 本文是读写任务型写作，这类作文可按照三段式模板写：第一段：概况所给短文要点．第二段：过渡词引出主题句---阐述理由．第三段：个人观点．特别要注意第一段的概括．用自己的语言概括，不能照搬照抄原文． 时态用一般现在时．人称用第一和第三人称． 重要短语：avoid sth（避免某事），seek a job（寻找一份工作），prefer to（更喜欢），compete with（与…竞争），fierce competition（激烈的竞争），live a cosy life （过着舒适的生活），as for （关于，至于），make a living（谋生），would rather do sth（宁愿做某事），gain experience（获得经验），thanks to（多亏了），grow into（长成），do good to （对…有好处），after graduation（毕业）．
【高分句型一】
1．①Working in a big city is of course an exciting thing，②which means better opportunities and more conveniences．
①此处是动名词短语"Working in a big city"作主语，谓语动词用单数．
②此处是非限制性定语从句，关系代词在从句中作主语，指代前面整个主句的内容．
【高分句型二】
1．While in a small town，where there are not so many elites to compete with，one can easily avoid the pressure from fierce competition in big cities to live a rather cosy life．
此处是由"where"引导的地点状语从句，主句为"one can easily avoid the pressure from fierce competition in big cities to live a rather cosy life"．
【高分句型三】
3．①Though hard，②struggling itself may gain me enough experience of doing business．
①此处是从句中的省略，可以理解为"Though it is hard"，主句为"struggling itself may gain me enough experience of doing business"．
②此处是动名词"struggling itself"作主语．
【高分句型四】
3．Thanks to the intense competition，I can grow into an experienced and competitive person，which does good to my later development．
此处是由关系代词"which"引导的非限制性定语从句，主句为"I can grow into an experienced and competitive person"，关系代词"which"在从句中作主语，指代整个主句的内容．

解答 Post-80s graduates hold different views towards job choices．Some，like Changping，will head back home to avoid the competition and pressure in big cities，while others，like Chen haihua，would prefer to stay in big cities to seek a better job．（概念）
Working in a big city is of course an exciting thing，which means better opportunities and more conveniences．【高分句型一】It's easier to find a well-paid job or a better platform to improve oneself．While in a small town，where there are not so many elites to compete with，one can easily avoid the pressure from fierce competition in big cities to live a rather cosy life．【高分句型二】（分析在大城市和回家乡就业各自的有利因素）
As for me，a girl from a remote village，I would rather struggle in a big city like Shenzhen to make a living than go back to my hometown．Though hard，struggling itself may gain me enough experience of doing business．【高分句型三】（如果大学毕业，会选择在哪里就业）
Therefore，after graduation，I will choose a big city as the start of my career．Thanks to the intense competition，I can grow into an experienced and competitive person，which does good to my later development．【高分句型四】（选择的理由）

点评 读写任务型写作是将阅读与写作有机结合，要求考生既能读懂文章信息，又要依据要求规范连贯地表达内容，其中准确概括很有挑战且十分重要，根据记叙文、议论文、说明文等不同文体作相应概括，总的来说，遵循以下步骤：确定主题句；寻找关键词；重构主题句；重组支持句．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．