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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(错误!不能通过编辑域代码创建对象。),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Last summer I take a part?time job in the International Camp for children. I have told one more worker will be needed in this year and I think you are fit for it. How about join us?The camp is at the foot of a small hill closed to a river. It is such beautiful a place! We can hear birds singing happy all around. Everybody sleeps in tents, that is very exciting. We usually work only five hours a day, so we will have plenty of spare time to visit the area and have fun. I am sure it will be a unforgettable experience. If you have interests in it, write to me soon.

Yours,

Mary

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People from every corner flooded into the streets that Christmas Eve. "Frosty the Snowman," and "Jingle Bells" in stores; on the pavements, the street singers performed happily. Everyone was by someone else, delighted and cheerful. I was alone.

As one of 8 kids of a Brazilian family, brought up in America's crowded apartment, I'd spent several years searching for aloneness. Now, , at 27, a college student after the with my girlfriend, every cell inside me wanted to be alone, not at Christmas. My family had to Brazil and my friends were with their own lives. Dusk was approaching, and the fact that I had to return to my home made me sad. Lights from windows blinked (闪烁), and I hoped someone would from one of those homes to invite me inside with a Christmas tree decorated with shiny fake snow and presents.

At a market, I felt more when people were buying lots of goods, which the gifts we received as children in my mind. I missed my family and wanted to cry for wanting to be alone and for having achieved it.

Outside the church, a manger (小耶稣) had been set . I stood with others watching the scene, some of them themselves, praying. As I walked home, I realized that leaving Brazil was still a painful experience as I struggled with I had become in 15 years in America. I'd mourned (悲叹) the , but for the first time, I recognized what I’d gained. I was independent, and healthy. My life was still ahead, full of .

Sometimes the best gift is the one that you give yourself. That Christmas, I gave myself for what I'd obtained up to now and promise to go forward. It is the best gift I've ever got, the one that I most .

1.A. served B. held C. shared D. played

2.A. employed B. attended C. supported D. accompanied

3.A. eventually B. usually C. extremely D. really

4.A. date B. sympathy C. breakup D. concern

5.A. but B. so C. and D. or

6.A. moved B. returned C. slipped D. came

7.A. bored B. pleased C. satisfied D. occupied

8.A. empty B. warm C. shabby D. cozy

9.A. hang out B. go away C. turn up D. break in

10.A. donated B. wrapped C. discounted D. dealt

11.A. nervous B. excited C. upset D. tired

12.A. called up B. called for C. called on D. called in

13.A. aside B. about C. down D. up

14.A. crossing B. hugging C. bowing D. bending

15. A. that B. what C. how D. which

16. A. worries B. cases C. limits D. losses

17.A. educated B. lonely C. shy D. wealthy

18.A. sadness B. possibility C. hardship D. sight

19.A. prize B. defeat C. credit D. surprise

20.A. save B. admit C. select D. value

My parents were in a huge argument, and I was really upset about it. I didn't know who I should talk with about how I was feeling. So I asked Mom to allow me to stay the night at my best friend's house. Though I knew I wouldn't tell her about my parents’ situation, I was looking forward to getting out of the house. I was in the middle of packing up my things when suddenly the power went out in the neighborhood. Mom came to tell me that I should stay with my grandpa until the power came back on.

I was really disappointed because I felt that we did not have much to talk about. But I knew he would be frightened alone in the dark. I went to his room and told him that I'd stay with him until the power was restored. He was quite happy and said, “Great opportunity.”

“What is it?” I asked.

“To talk, you and I” he said. “To hold a private little meeting about what we’re going to do with your mom and dad, and what we're going to do with ourselves now that we're in the situation we are in.”

“But we can't do anything about it. Grandpa,” I said, surprised that here was someone with whom I could share my feelings and someone who was in the same “boat” as I was.

And that's how the most unbelievable friendship between my grandfather and me started. Sitting in the dark, we talked about our feelings and fears of life — from how fast things change to how they sometimes don't change fast enough. That night, because the power went out, I found a new friend, with whom I could safely talk about all my fears and pains, whatever they may be. Suddenly, the lights all came back on. “Well,” he said, “I guess that means you'll want to go now. I really like our talk. I hope the power will go out every few nights!”

1.I wished to get out of the house because __________.

A. I was eager to have fun with my best friend

B. I found nobody to share my feelings with

C. I wanted to escape from the dark house

D. I planned to tell my friend about my trouble

2. Grandpa was happy to see me because __________.

A. he could discuss the problem with me

B. he had not seen me for a long lime

C. he was afraid of darkness

D. he felt quite lonely

3.What can be inferred from the passage?

A. The grandchild was eager to leave.

B. They would have more chats.

C. The lights would go out again.

D. It would no longer be dark.

Blogit is the first online subscription(订阅) network connecting individual readers and writers.As Blogit grows, amazing things are happening.A friendly, active community has formed: readers are finding writers they enjoy; strangers are becoming friends; old classmates are running into one another; even romances are blossoming.And popular writers have already earned more than $1,000 on Blogit each month.

Want to try? First of all, Blogit lets writers easily realize their dreams to write.Writers get their own writing space, where they are free to write on any topic, whenever they want: from opinion and observation to novel and poetry.Secondly, writers experience the excitement of knowing they are read, and enjoy gradually gaining a loyal(忠实的) following.It' s simple for writers to find readers on Blogit, since there is a various, worldwide audience of people, waiting to read and comment ----right now.

You never know whom you might meet on Blogit.Whether writers are looking for a quiet readership or are hungry for a spirited discussion, they will find it on Blogit. Many writers even have readers who have become new friends. Blogit member introduction appear on many of the top Internet search engines, which allows writers to publicize (宣传)their identity and helps increase their number of readers.

Thanks to modern technology, writers get everything they need to begin.They can even make additional choices, to add pictures and select different styles, for example.There is nothing to install(安装), and no special software is needed.As Blogit grows, we are upgrading(更新)our systems and adding new features(专题节目) requested by members.We do our best to help members, replying to most questions within one business day.

I invite you to try Blogit today.Here' s my promise: if you find that you aren't being read on Blogit, simply cancel(取消) your subscription and you will not be charged again.It' s quick and easy to sign up.If you sign up now, you’ll get all of Blogit’s benefits for only $12.95 per month.You can start to be read and begin earning money directly!

1.We can learn from the first paragraph that Blogit is __________.

A.a website on which people can make friends

B.located at a small community

C.a website which makes no money

D.developing fast

2.What is Blogit doing to meet writers’ needs according to the passage?

A.Replying to most questions every day.

B.Upgrading its system regularly.

C.Giving writers special software to install.

D.Choosing different topics for readers

3.The author’s purpose in writing this passage is to _________.

A.tell people a good way to make money online

B.offer some information about Blogit

C.attract people to sign up for Blogit

D.guide people to realize their dream to write

根据短文内容,从短文后的选项中选出能填入空白处的最佳选项。选项中有两项为多余选项。

Celebrate!

Pinatas(彩饰陶罐)

In Mexico, children often get pinatas on their birthday.Their parents put chocolates and other sweets inside the pinata and hang it on a tree.Then the children hit the pinata with a stick. 1.

Noodles

In China,people often celebrate birthdays by eating with family or friends,and the last dish of the meal is always noodles. The noodles are long and thin. 2. You can’t cut them. In Chinese culture,long noodles mean you will have a long life.

Business birthdays

A business birthday shows that a company is successful.Many businesses in the USA celebrate important birthdays, like 10, 50 or 150 years. 3. Sometimes they make TV advertisements.It is a good chance to advertise the business.

Name days

As well as a birthday, many people in Southern Europe also celebrate their name day. 4. People have big parties and open their houses to anybody who wants to come.People bring small gifts,often flowers or a box of sweets.

Islamic New Year

In Muslim(穆斯林) countries across the world,people celebrate Eid. Eid means festival or celebration.During Eid,people visit family and friends,as well as people who are sick or in hospital. 5. Children receive toys,too.Children often wear special traditional clothes during the Eid celebrations.

A.You have to eat them in one piece.

B.They go out for a meal to celebrate.

C.Companies hold parties and send cards.

D.They give presents, such as sweets and food.

E.It breaks and the sweets fall out on to the ground.

F.This is one of the two important festivals in this country.

G.In Greece, name days are more important than birthdays.

Many children first learn the value of money by receiving an allowance. The purpose is to let children learn from experience at an age when financial mistakes are not very costly.

The amount of money that parents give to their children to spend as they wish differs from family to family. Timing is another consideration. Some children get a weekly allowance. Others get a monthly allowance.

In any case, parents should make clear what, if anything, the child is expected to pay for with the money.

At first, young children may spend all of their allowance soon after they receive it. If they do this, they will learn the hard way that spending must be done within a budget. Parents are usually advised not to offer more money until the next allowance. The object is to show young people that a budget demands choices between spending and saving. Older children may be responsible enough to save money for larger costs, like clothing or electronics.

Allowances give children a chance to experience the things they can do with money. They can share it in the form of gifts or giving to a good cause. They can spend it by buying things they want. Or they can save and maybe even invest (投资) it.

Saving helps children understand that costly goals require sacrifice: you have to cut costs and plan for the future. Requiring children to save part of their allowance can also open the door to future saving and investing. Many banks offer services to help children and teenagers learn about personal finance. A savings account is an excellent way to learn about the power of compound interest (利息). That may not seem like a lot. But over time it adds up.

1. Parents give their children allowance to ________.

A. show off their wealth

B. let them make more money

C. let children manage family finance

D. learn the value of money

2. Why are parents advised not to offer young children more money in advance?

A. To show them how to make a budget.

B. To save money for larger costs.

C. To let children make fewer mistakes

D. To give them more allowance next time.

3. What can we learn from the last paragraph?

A. Children need not save their allowance.

B. Saving can help children plan future finance.

C. Children can buy everything with their allowance.

D. All children must have a savings account.

4. The author intends to ________.

A. make parents aware of the children’s allowances

B. show the methods of investing

C. give advice on how to save money

D. introduce the advantages of allowances

根据短文内容,从短文后的选项中选出能填入空白处的最佳选项。选项中有两项为多余选项。

In less than ten months, you will go to different universities and lead a new life. In your new life, making new friends is a must. Then, how can you make new friends quickly?

Everybody knows friends come and go. You have friends for every time and season of your life from youth to old age. Sometimes people change their goal in life. Perhaps you’ve made a change yourself, such as a new job or moved to a new location. ­­­­___1.____ Making new friends quickly is possible once you go about it the right way.

In order to make friends, you must first be a friend. Consider joining groups and associations that are of interest to you. ____2.___ Go out of your way to be friendly, and you’ll make new friends quickly.

___3.__ If you need help, there are millions of books on the subject of good manners.Treat people with politeness and you will see people start to flock to you because of your pleasant personality.

Become good at something. You can do well in a sport, an instrument,writing, languages or whatever else you enjoy. ___4.___ This makes you interesting and gets people to be attracted to you. It’s not about doing this for the sake of attracting attention, but having a skill at something is another way to make new friends quickly.

Share contact information with people you meet who seem interesting. Then invite them to do things with you. ____5.____ Showing interest in people by actually inviting them to do things will help you create friends quickly.

A. It could be as simple as drinking coffee together.

B. Always practice good manners.

C. You don’t have to be an expert, but at least good enough to help others with your skill.

D. Get to know your friends’ friends.

E. This may also change your circle of friends.

F. You are likely to find others who share things in common with you.

G. It is not necessary to be skillful in something.

阅读下面短文,从短文后各题所给四个选项(A、B、C和D)中,选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项,并在答题卡上将该项涂黑

Value Now No Longer Missed

John, a famous musician, took his priceless antique zither(齐特琴)and played it in the crowded subway station. The music emanating from the zither was delicately streaming the whole station. However, during the one-hour play, only six or seven people were truly the charming music. John only got 52 dollars for his work that day.

However, in normal days, when John is about to hold a , one ticket can be sold at more than 100 dollars and it is extremely to buy a ticket even at such a high price. Therefore, later, many passers-by in the station that day felt deeply for not recognizing the famous musician and missing such a valuable but music feast.

I have a very friend who had totally changed after knowing that his wife an acute illness. He cooked by himself for the family and took a walk with his wife every day. Nonetheless, his wife still did not manage to the illness and passed away after three months. After that, he often sighed that due to his past busy life, he had missed a lot of beautiful time with his wife. But now, it is to make up for it.

It is no use crying over spilt milk. We have a lot of precious things in our life without knowing how to them. Actually, I also missed something before. The reason is simple: we had thought that we could still own them tomorrow.

Nevertheless, tomorrow is actually reliable. There was a famous Buddhist monk saying that in many people’s lives, they have only done two things: waiting and . The result is that they were always too late to cherish they had before they lost it. We would often claim to do something when we , or when we have money or when we become old, etc. However, when we reach the , we could no longer realize our , because we have lost it by then.

1.A. beforeB. throughoutC. aboveD. for

2.A. appreciating B. listeningC. creating D. discussing

3.A. meetingB. partyC. debateD. concert

4.A. easyB. convenientC. possibleD. difficult

5.A. excitedB. disappointedC. regretfulD. worried

6.A. specialB. cheapC. deliciousD. wonderful

7.A. lazyB. socialC. busyD. optimistic

8.A. put up withB. came down withC. came up withD. end up with

9.A. cureB. diagnoseC. attackD. conquer

10.A. miserably B. helplessly C. deliberatelyD. slightly

11.A. necessaryB. absoluteC. impossibleD. beneficial

12.A. missedB. madeC. inventedD. contributed

13.A. valueB. applyC. conserveD. convey

14.A. importantB. preciousC. positiveD. negative

15.A. to some degreeB. on the wayC. at all timesD. by no means

16.A. regrettingB. rewardingC. demandingD. expecting

17.A. whichB. thatC. whatD. when

18.A. get upB. set upC. grow upD. make up

19.A. goalB. conditionC. agreementD. destination

20.A. dangerB. mistakeC. purposeD. wish

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