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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Mr.Smith had neither wife nor children.He liked nothing but drinking.He almost spent all of his money drinks.Sometimes he went hungry, but he had to borrow some money to buy some food.One evening he met a friend of him in the street.The man invited him to have dinner in a restaurant.He was very

happy that he drank too much.His friend stopped a taxi and ask the driver to

take him home.Soon they reached in the door of his house.The driver drove away.But Mr Smith couldn't insert the key into the keyhole.Just then a policeman went up, offering to help him but he refused, saying "the house is circled now.If you can keep it moving, I can open the door myself.”

 

1.wife前加a

2.drinks-drinking或drinks前加on

3.but-so/and

4.him-his

5.very-so

6.ask-asked

7.in去掉

8.went-came

9.circled-circling

10.keep-stop/prevent或moving前加from

【解析】

试题分析:

1.名词用法错误。句中wife为可数名词,故需要在前加不定冠词a。

2.短语用法错误。这里考查短语:spend … (in) doing sth. / on sth.花费时间做某事/在某事上。

3.连词用法错误。这里前后之间为并列关系或因果关系,故用and或so。

4.代词用法错误。这里表示“他的一个朋友”,故用a friend of his。

5.副词用法错误。这里考查so … that …句型,表示“如此…… 以至于……”

6.时态用法错误。根据前后句的时态可知,用一般过去时。

7.介词用法错误。动词reach是及物动词,故将介词in去掉。

8.动词用法错误。这里考查短语come up走近。

9.时态用法错误。根据时间状语now可知,用现在进行时。

10.短语用法错误。表示“阻止 …… 做……”,用keep … from doing或stop/prevent … doing。

考点:考查词汇语法用法

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